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Aug
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Can we please stop doing the "anon does something/somepony" stories? · 10:26pm Aug 22nd, 2014

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If only. Sadly, there are a lot of people who seem to like that crap :trixieshiftleft:

Agreed. I can see the appeal, but there are much better ways of doing it.

I'm not as annoyed my Anon as I am by "You." :ajbemused:

Sorry, I don't understand.

I agree, they are getting old quickly. I especially hate the use of anon. If you're going to write a story about a human in Equestria, at least come up with a name other than anon...

2392083 I was going to say what happened to the good days where this site had actual good stories, but I don't think that ever actually happened at any point :rainbowwild:

2392087 Don't argue with Scruffy

2392092 Like just making a HiE story 3rd person? I agree.

2392093 I hate anon because it's blatant "THIS CAN BE YOU!!" At least the "You" stories are an actual PoV style of literature.

2392105 Two two are on the featured list (I don't have view mature on).

2392209 BUT I'M BEING SO EDGY!!!

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IMO, Human In Equestria stories only work if the human in question has an interesting personality. If he's just a blank, then the story is pointless. The best HiE story I ever read was My Little Balladeer, in which both the humans had strong, epic personalities (one for good, and one for evil), and the hero had strong ties with Earth and wanted to go back home. Stories about people who have no lives whatsoever going to fantasy worlds and being worshipped by the inhabitants are just plain stupid.

I agree with your title, but can I also complain about ponies in diapers/regression fics? Those come up too often for me, and are always just annoying to see.

2392570 I just want a story with depth honestly. More than that, fucking don't say "anon" in the damn title. It's pretty much saying "I don't give a fuck." Yet, people eat it up.

2392616 I have never seen these.

I've only read one decent HiE story, and it remains unchallenged in my book:
The Best of All Possible Worlds

All others need not apply.

2393455 Consider yourself lucky, or unlucky now, since I'm about to link you to a group full of these stories:

The biggest folder in the "Adult Foals and Diapered Pony Crusaders YAY!" group. The latest two stories added were posted within the last four days, though I haven't the slightest on the overall rate of posting. And yes, I find them supremely creepy and annoying

Yeah... That whole "Anon" character thing is one I do not understand in the slightest. :ajbemused:

BronyHuman in Equestria? Fine. At least they actually have names and faces.

OC Ponies? Fine. Again, names and faces.

Second Person, aka "You"? Yeah, when you give "You" an actual character, name, face, and gender (bonus points if male!), then "You" are not an insert.

Anon? ...Really? It's so pointless and confusing. It's supposed to be anyone and everyone. Yet, they all have personalities, are pretty much guys, and are self-inserts to be with their favourite pony(ies). Why not just write them as a self-insert, then? At least there it's not bullshit! Why do they have to be Anon? For a reader to insert themselves into? I'm not an expert on writing in that style, but I have a feeling it doesn't quite work that way.

Thank, now I get it. I don't typically read HiE stories, so I wouldn't have read any of these in the first place.

Azu

I see the whole anon thing as a total cop-out. A "I'm too lazy to create a real character with depth"

Frankly it's a massive insult to the HiE genre. :trixieshiftleft:

2393459 I don't mind HiE bad. I consider anon in Equestria bad.

2393465 Let me say it again, I have not seen any of these stories.

2393558 I feel like anon is the new "you" form of stories. They are meant to try and make it so YOU AS THE READER see yourself in the story as the main character. One of those they are trying to make YOU the character 100%, not just seeing in their eyes. The fact that they are mostly in romance/mature stories makes it sexy creepy.

2393670 You are welcome! Also thanks for not pointing out my typo typo :rainbowwild:

2394545 Considering many feel the HiE is the lowest common denominator, that's a low bar :twilightoops:

2394719 That's pretty much what it is, all right! The "Anon" stories are the new Second Person stories. They're meant to cater to YOUR fantasies, to be with YOUR favourite pon(ies)y, in YOUR favourite part of Equestria with YOUR favourite characters.

I feel that the less attempts to make the audience surrogate "You", the more easier it is to connect with it. I don't like Brony Human in Equestria stories, but at least there's a lot more to idenity with. Even if the character isn't you, there's still something to understand, to feel close to, and to feel like, yeah, that could be you! They do a better job at "You" being there without even trying to make it you! It's in the inspiration that it could be you that makes it effective in that regard, not the blatant factor that it is you.

Hannah Montana, all Acceptable Target elements aside, plays that very well. Yes, HM is indeed the alter ego persona of the main character. She has the definitive fact that she's her. But at the same time, the series markets that in the way that Hannah Montana is also YOU. Without actually being you. The implication is what sells it.

So really, when I see "Anon" or "You, I don't feel like that could be me, I feel like there's bullshit all over it and like there's a character there, even though it should be me. But it's not. It just doesn't capture the feeling that it's you in this world.

And yeah... usually it's for romance purposes. Harmless, yeah, but I wish they were more self-aware and honest about it. There's really no need to bullshit.

Azu

2394719

While that may be so, it's still good to at least have some standards. :duck:

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