A pony fic I wrote that won't be coming to Fimfic...

It's called DADA, and you can find it here.

It is 1000 words long, and one (grammatically iffy) sentence.

I will pay anyone who manages to get through the entire thing (not really).

plumander

Comments

[Karibela]

I... did it! Now my eyes hurt.
Pro semi-colon-usage. Not so keen on the commas .

[DeeToo]

Just. wat.
2275725 I don't see any semicolons...

[not plu]

2276081 That's the point of his comment. Also, there's 1 semicolon.

[FloydienSlip]

I have no idea what I just read, but let it be known that I, to a degree, which, in this case, is not even remotely related to temperature or, for that matter, levels of education, enjoyed the manner in which you, unless someone else, such as a family member or friend, wrote this, and I think that your story, if it can be called that, as it is a mere sentence long, not counting the lone semi-colon, was an excellent, if not aggravating, or, as the case may be, frustrating for those of us who prefer the traditional sentence structure, hereafter referred to, colloquially, as Grammar Nazis, whether they are, in fact, German and Socialist or not, experimental work of literature, and while I missed the greater meaning of the story, if it did, indeed, have one, I commend you on this piece, as you have validated my decision to follow you, even if it was only because Plum told me to, and though I am not one for peer pressure, usually, I'm glad I listened to him; and, again, I must reiterate my thorough enjoyment of this short story.

[not plu]

2281565 I'll go yell at Plum for pretending he's a mob boss again.