Jul
5th
2014
Chapter Overhaul · 5:31am Jul 5th, 2014
Alright, to those of you who actually do read these, the first and second chapters of TotNS have been edited to a (hopefully) much higher standard of quality. There is now an actual intro to Mortis!
Yeah that was a big mistake on my part to not include that.
Anyway, the first chapter has had a ton of new information added to it, namely descriptions of the characters and scenery. The second has been edited as well, adding a few more descriptors and actions. Hopefully I can get the third chapter up to the same standard of quality on the first try. So, I would recommend re-reading them, if you want to that is.
Also, I am hoping to get a friend of mine as a proofreader and editor for my story.
That is all,
-Magna.
