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I am nothing great, just a pony who enjoys reading great stories and trying my best to tell some myself.

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  • 170 weeks
    BREAKING NEWS!

    I have great news for everypony. I have beaten back the evil of writer's block and have gotten back into the habit of writing once more. So with that said, I am currently working on chapter six of "I'm Not A Mare". And I have an idea and plan for chapter seven. I hope everypony is excited as I am for the next update. If you want to check out my non-mlp stories, please check out

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  • 238 weeks
    I did another crazy thing

    As you have guessed by the title of the post is that I have done something. So the crazy thing that I have done is created a discord group for fanfic writers and just everyday writers. I will leave the link below. I hope to see many of you there.
    https://discord.gg/EkabttH

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  • 240 weeks
    I'm Not a Mare livestream

    Hello everypony,
    Tonight I am going to be doing a little test. I am going to be streaming work on the next chapter of "I'm Not a Mare". The stream is going to start around 7:30 PM EST. Please swing by, ask questions, chat with me, and just have some fun. Livestream

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  • 240 weeks
    This Mare is streaming some games

    Hey everypony,
    I am going to be streaming some Surviving Mars today at 6 PM EST. Come on over and watch me and I am even open to some Q&A if you stop by and ask.
    https://www.twitch.tv/chakat_newme

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  • 242 weeks
    I live

    I am very sorry for stepping away for so long. It was never planned or anything. Life happened and hit me hard. I know my words are not worth much cause I took a three-year gab. Writing stories shouldn't be like taking time away from college. So with the sorry out of the way; let me drop some news on everypony. Early this year, I came to some truths about myself. I was a stallion who was not

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Jul
1st
2014

A Writer bellyacting · 4:36am Jul 1st, 2014

I submitted a story to EQD. I wasn't expecting to get it posted, but I was expecting some kind of feed back on what I needed to do better. Instead all I got was this little copy and pasted message.

Thank you for submitting your story to Equestria Daily, but, unfortunately, I cannot recommend posting it at this time. Due to the high volume of stories we receive on a daily basis, we cannot give specific feedback. Our Editor’s Omnibus contains a thorough list of the issues we look for in our reviews, and also contains resources for finding proofreaders and editors. Give it a look, as it will go a long way toward improving your writing!

Sincerely,
Pre-reader 63.546

And a link to the Editor's Omnibus. I know they change their policy on story submissions and other things, but a rejection letter like this just doesn't show me where I suck as a writer. I want to be a better writer. I do, but when I don't even get feedback, I can't really improve. I might as well just say the whole story sucks and just rewrite it from the ground up and hope that I fix whatever I did wrong.

Having a story on EQD has been a dream of mine since the time I started writing here, but with the way things are looking now. I feel like I'm wasting my time trying to send them anything. I feel like I have a better chance of getting feedback from groups on here that do the same thing as EQD. If I remember, The Royal Guard group has pre-readers who will write you a message in detail about what you can do to improve your story. So I will applauded them for their work.

I'm sorry for wasting your time. Just needed someplace to vent. I will tag the story that I submitted to them.

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Comments ( 10 )

That's a slap to your face! I would say fuck them for that, not even bothering to give you a proper look over!

2247705
I was just hoping for some kind of feedback on how I can do better. :ajsleepy: I got nothing, which saddens me.:raritydespair:

Are you going to EFNW?

2247750 Repliy to them, and leave a note saying you got this shit service last time. Or something along those lines

2247758
I wish, but that is too far away. And don't have the money to go.:ajsleepy:

2247871
Shoot me what you've got (preferably on google docs -- I'll PM you with my address), and I'll see if I can get the writing track staff guys to give it a review for you.

2248360
:eeyup: what he said. :twilightsmile:

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