Time Crusade, Chapter 4.

Well, here it is, finally. This is the part with all the action.

There may still be some small adjustments to be made, and usually I'd be making a bunch of edits now to eliminate any minor errors that slipped through. I have reason to think that messes with people's favorite lists updating, though, so I'm just going to leave it alone for now. I'm sure it's readable, at least.

I never did find the time to make that illustration I wanted to include, but it's not really necessary to enjoy the chapter so oh well. If I get around to finishing it, I'll probably add it to the chapter or put it up as bonus material at a later date.

Comments

[playnwin]

Two chapters in as many months? I hope this keeps up! (I'll catch up from November, I promise!)