rewrite? · 6:17am Jun 12th, 2014
Something that's been on my mind for some time now is: should I rewrite the prologue of Mage's Jump be rewritten?
short answer- yes
long answer- why haven't you done it sooner you freaking idiot?
Honestly, I've been considering since like, chapter eight. But a mix of focusing on current chapters and just being too scared to even look at them made me put it off, save for some small changes I've made to a couple chapters. That being said, I've decided it's long overdue for a full rewrite (sort of), as well as some changes to the story as a whole.
So here's the plan: once chapter 20 is out (giving me time to plan for this shit), I'll be taking another break from writing new chapters to work on rewriting the proluge chapters, ranging from small changes (the first part is okay in my opinion, so will only make a few tweaks to that), to damn near complete overhauls (*cough*festival*cough*). Along with this, I've been considering something else in the past few days- a new name.
admittedly this is another thing I've never been entirely happy with, but could never really think of a decent name.
Current ideas are either "Tale of a Mage" or "A Mage's Tale"
This one I'm iffy about though, as while I'm not too happy with the name, I don't hate it either. So if anyone has any opinion on it, please let me know.
So yeah, planing a rewrite (might even start it off soon, since I'm going through a couple ruff patches with next chapter right now, and writing for the story might help) and possibly renaming, any questions or suggestions should be left in comments section below.