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Marvelous Cheshire


Previously known as Genosaber

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  • 422 weeks
    Update 4/22/16

    So... it's been a while.

    First off, obviously not dead, just the same problems as before (good ol' writer's block), but there is good news

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  • 469 weeks
    Updates

    So it's been a while since I last updated Son of Man, Daughter of Pony...

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  • 479 weeks
    some updates and advertising

    <glances over at clock> stars above it's late, why am I posting this ag- oh right, wanted to plug something for a friend and I keep getting distracted

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  • 489 weeks
    More notes on anthros (and the setting)

    Let me start off by saying the next chapter of Son of Man, Daughter of Pony is in the works, it's likely going to be one of the shorter chapters (I'm not even completely sure if it'll get past 1k in word count, but we'll see), though it is just meant to be a little bridging chapter between Melody's first two classes.

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  • 493 weeks
    Notes on rewrite

    As I mentioned back in September, I'm planning on rewriting the prologue section of Mage's Jump, I've decided that, instead of waiting till chapter 20 (which, given my my current update schedule, will be a long ways off... on the plus side the next couple chapters are a bit less focused on the main plot, one is a flashback and the other is to start what I hope/plan to be a minor subplot) I'm

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Jun
12th
2014

rewrite? · 6:17am Jun 12th, 2014

Something that's been on my mind for some time now is: should I rewrite the prologue of Mage's Jump be rewritten?

short answer- yes

long answer- why haven't you done it sooner you freaking idiot?

Honestly, I've been considering since like, chapter eight. But a mix of focusing on current chapters and just being too scared to even look at them made me put it off, save for some small changes I've made to a couple chapters. That being said, I've decided it's long overdue for a full rewrite (sort of), as well as some changes to the story as a whole.

So here's the plan: once chapter 20 is out (giving me time to plan for this shit), I'll be taking another break from writing new chapters to work on rewriting the proluge chapters, ranging from small changes (the first part is okay in my opinion, so will only make a few tweaks to that), to damn near complete overhauls (*cough*festival*cough*). Along with this, I've been considering something else in the past few days- a new name.

admittedly this is another thing I've never been entirely happy with, but could never really think of a decent name.

Current ideas are either "Tale of a Mage" or "A Mage's Tale"

This one I'm iffy about though, as while I'm not too happy with the name, I don't hate it either. So if anyone has any opinion on it, please let me know.

So yeah, planing a rewrite (might even start it off soon, since I'm going through a couple ruff patches with next chapter right now, and writing for the story might help) and possibly renaming, any questions or suggestions should be left in comments section below.

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