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OhYouFoal


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  • 609 weeks
    Story on Hiatus

    School has started and free time has shrunk by roughly 60-70%. My education comes as a priority over this story. Apologies to active followers, hope you understand. Will get back to it when I can, no specifics on when that is though...

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  • 613 weeks
    In the Middle of a Move, Temporary Halt

    Will resume writing when I can, all free time for the past few weeks has been spent on moving related work, sleep and getting stress out via games and whatnot.

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  • 614 weeks
    One to Make Him Shine (Progress Update 8/6 or 8/7, Plus SIDE STORY VOTING!)

    Currently, I'm a little over halfway done with the chapter and I'm at nine pages and I'm about a third or fourth of the way into the backstory for Trixie that I promised.

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  • 615 weeks
    I SAID I'D DO IT LIVE!

    AND I DID!!!!!!

    ...Wrote five pages tonight, that's 2 and a half more pages than I had written over the past month.

    The story is back on track and chapter 4 should finish soon. As early as thursday or as late as monday, I'm going to attempt to try and make that goal. I'm at about the halfway point of the chapter, so I'm feeling good about this.

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  • 615 weeks
    FUCK IT, I'LL DO IT LIVE!!

    ...Uh, except not really.

    Chapter 4 has been on hold for a while and it was simply from the inability to figure out how to make a particular part of it work out. To be specific, I was having trouble working out how to handle the first half.

    But, after browsing through some other stories on here, I came to a state of clarity and realized that sometimes less is more.

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May
31st
2012

Unspecified Delay · 8:48pm May 31st, 2012

Due to a desire to sort of 'edit the chapter to a state of better written...ness', chapter 3 is on an unspecified delay. Won't be longer than a week though, but can't give any specific days.

Should hopefully be worth the wait, there are a couple scenes I want to clean up and make sure are tweaked to my preferences.

So yeah, sorry about that. At the least, chapter 3 should have enough going on (and is already plenty long in page count) itself to make it feel like it was worth the wait at least.

Most of the editing is an attempt to clean up my occasionally boring writing style, wherein I repeat descriptions and depictions of character behavior and reactions. When you write a chapter as long as this one, it's kind of unavoidable, especially considering that I'm somewhat new at this.

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