Unspecified Delay · 8:48pm May 31st, 2012
Due to a desire to sort of 'edit the chapter to a state of better written...ness', chapter 3 is on an unspecified delay. Won't be longer than a week though, but can't give any specific days.
Should hopefully be worth the wait, there are a couple scenes I want to clean up and make sure are tweaked to my preferences.
So yeah, sorry about that. At the least, chapter 3 should have enough going on (and is already plenty long in page count) itself to make it feel like it was worth the wait at least.
Most of the editing is an attempt to clean up my occasionally boring writing style, wherein I repeat descriptions and depictions of character behavior and reactions. When you write a chapter as long as this one, it's kind of unavoidable, especially considering that I'm somewhat new at this.