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OhYouFoal


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  • 609 weeks
    Story on Hiatus

    School has started and free time has shrunk by roughly 60-70%. My education comes as a priority over this story. Apologies to active followers, hope you understand. Will get back to it when I can, no specifics on when that is though...

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  • 612 weeks
    In the Middle of a Move, Temporary Halt

    Will resume writing when I can, all free time for the past few weeks has been spent on moving related work, sleep and getting stress out via games and whatnot.

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  • 614 weeks
    One to Make Him Shine (Progress Update 8/6 or 8/7, Plus SIDE STORY VOTING!)

    Currently, I'm a little over halfway done with the chapter and I'm at nine pages and I'm about a third or fourth of the way into the backstory for Trixie that I promised.

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  • 615 weeks
    I SAID I'D DO IT LIVE!

    AND I DID!!!!!!

    ...Wrote five pages tonight, that's 2 and a half more pages than I had written over the past month.

    The story is back on track and chapter 4 should finish soon. As early as thursday or as late as monday, I'm going to attempt to try and make that goal. I'm at about the halfway point of the chapter, so I'm feeling good about this.

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  • 615 weeks
    FUCK IT, I'LL DO IT LIVE!!

    ...Uh, except not really.

    Chapter 4 has been on hold for a while and it was simply from the inability to figure out how to make a particular part of it work out. To be specific, I was having trouble working out how to handle the first half.

    But, after browsing through some other stories on here, I came to a state of clarity and realized that sometimes less is more.

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Jul
31st
2012

FUCK IT, I'LL DO IT LIVE!! · 3:03am Jul 31st, 2012

...Uh, except not really.

Chapter 4 has been on hold for a while and it was simply from the inability to figure out how to make a particular part of it work out. To be specific, I was having trouble working out how to handle the first half.

But, after browsing through some other stories on here, I came to a state of clarity and realized that sometimes less is more.

In this case, Chapter 4 is going to be shorter than I had planned and what I had will be shelved as coming later on in the story or as a side story. It was extra detail that had me writing about Trixie in a way I wasn't really capable of writing in a way I felt... well capable of writing. It wasn't that it was out of character, so much as I can't work it into the story the way I wanted.

So, rather than having a flashback or something like that, I will literally be having Trixie tell her version of her cutie mark story and a couple other moments. HOWEVER, the much requested 'prologue' type of explanation as to how Trixie got to her current world will still happen. As I said before though, less is more and I will be avoiding too much unnecessary detail for the sake of getting the chapter out and getting past a significant roadblock.

So, hopefully we're looking at 2 weeks or less for Chapter 4's completion... Assuming I don't get Writer's block again and fall victim to too many distractions.

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