Cacoon rewrite gettin there!

I've finally devoted a lot of my time to rewriting the second worst piece of writing I've ever posted. The first is inexcusable and has been redacted. Dreams man. The dreams...
Anyway, the beginning of the chapter is still mostly the same, but it's been fine tuned to fit the rest of the changing chapter. Things in the end will make more sense because of what will happen now. Or to be more accurate, what will end up have happened in the future past. Basically, I'm rewriting history.