I might have goofed. · 4:38pm Jun 5th, 2015
So... about that next chapter of Kingdom Hearts: Friendship is Magic...
I'm kind of screwed. I thought that a Toy Story chapter would be good; that there would be a lot of opportunity for an interesting story there. However, after spending literally months trying to think and plan, the writing part itself is awful. Reactions are awkward. It's damn near impossible to match the same tone as in the movie. Put simply, it's lifeless. I've got no idea how to write for this movie. So please, let me know in the comments; what should I do? The chapters aren't good, but I also want to update the story and see where I can take the characters.
Unfortunately, the main characters are on a time constraint. They've only got so much time to save their friends. Putting them in a situation where they would have to spend a week in a world is counter productive. I might be able to salvage the chapter later, but for now, it seems like a no go. But what do you think? Post in the comments below.