Opinions?

Everybody likes it so far? No? Why? What am I doing wrong, or what am I doing right? Input helps me get motivated.

Comments

[Mortal Kombat]

I like it.

I like his inner distrust and paranoia.
But I would love to see some payback for humankind. violent and bloody payback.

[Brony Of Dust]

It's different and enjoyable I'll give it that, I'm more stand offish on the 'humans are weak' view, my own fic is testament to that, but you present it in a way that keeps me coming back.

Soooooo good job.

[BitSmith]

I am unable to see what you posted for some reason. Could you link to it in some other way?

[Escaping Reality]

2110219 Sure bud!
I asked everyone "Everybody likes it so far? No? Why? What am I doing wrong, or what am I doing right? Input helps me get motivated."

[BitSmith]

2110229 Well, I do believe it is going rather well! I have a feeling though that the whole slave thing is going to become the new story fad.

[Escaping Reality]

2110239 Well, thank you for that! And yes I know what you mean. It's going to be tough though cause there's already two amazing ones out right now. Chains and Heavenfall (two of my favorites) so I gotta do my best and steer clear of even accidentally taking ideas and such.

[BitSmith]

2110253 *looks up Heavenfall* Hmm. I'm more of a romance kind of person but I shall give it a shot. Also, along a similar vein, you should look up "Your Human and You" if you haven't already seen it.

[Escaping Reality]

2110269 Got that in my favorites

[The dragon hunter]

I've read other stories involving slavery and I can say in total honesty that your is the one that I like the most The subject is dramatic (slavery is never a good thing, it doesn't matter who's the slave and who's the master ), but I like how you have showed it in the story.
I'm curious to see how the events will develop. The protagonist will be able to give a second chance to the ponies?