FiM Fiction Review: Adventures in Cake Sitting · 5:19pm Apr 18th, 2014
Greetings, internet travelers! It has been quite a while since the last review so, with the help of the bestest friends anyone can ask for, I've returned to rectify this situation! Jumping right in, JMac’s Adventures in Cake Sitting, the sequel to Quizzical, unfortunately doesn’t live up to its predecessor; which scored an 8 out of 10 here on Problematic Reviews. There are glaring issues in the introduction and pacing problems that inhibit the story's ability to fully develop characters and get the reader interested in the plot. However, Adventures in Cake Sitting picks up towards the latter part and fans of Quizzical who are looking for something to read might enjoying another story featuring the timid little pony. Unfortunately, the ending just doesn't make up for much of these issues. So without further ado, head below the break for my review of JMac’s Adventures in Cake Sitting.
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Adventures in Cake Sitting by JMac
Complete! (Completed on 19th July 2013)
Quizzical Greystone has never foal sat. As usual, her first time she begins by falling in at the deep end - she has to watch the Cake twins. It's an imposing task for a pony like Quiz, even under the best of conditions. Tonight, conditions are far from perfect. Read it here.
Tags: Comedy, Adventure - Rating: Everyone
Words: 14,509 words total - Renowned Author - One Other Review: FiM Fiction Review - Quizzical
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I'm gonna check this one out a little later. :D Like how you do the text over the images :)
I havent seen you do anything in a while good to see that you're still working hard.
I won't lie and say I'm not disappointed with the review. I'm quite proud of this story. But I also cannot say it isn't fair. I can understand all the points made, even those I don't entirely agree with. This provokes thoughts about the story's flaws.
I'm very pleased to see the reviews begin again. Carry on.