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LoneUnicornWriter


Just a person that reads, writes, and reviews stuff. Oh, and draws.

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  • 87 weeks
    I’m alive again.

    Came back and confused as to how to see anything here. Is anyone still around? Oh, and I don’t even know how to write stories anymore not.. that I was probably ever good in the first place.

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  • 193 weeks
    I'm back again.

    Is anyone around? *echoes*

    Sup guys, glad to be able to log back on to this website. How's everyone? (If anyone is still around)

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  • 252 weeks
    Yeah, I'm still alive

    So I've been away for like months, I'm sure at this point no one or nopony (is that still a thing? Idk) noticed. I've got a job and I'm about to start a year course in September and work everyday of the week except the weekend and I've gotten in to taking my art practice more seriously so I barely had and still barely have time to come on here, so my writing and editing skills pretty much died

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  • 294 weeks
    Regarding my Editing and Proofreading Availability

    Okay so everyone waiting for edits and proofreads from me will have to wait till tomorrow night. And my availability for all related work will be on Saturdays and sometimes Sunday. Days may change in the coming weeks but for now that is what it is for my availability. Thank you for reading.

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  • 301 weeks
    Proofreading Services Reminder

    I just want to remind everyone that if they have a story that needs proofreading that I'm here and available to take their story. I work only with gdocs and only make suggestions for each author to make changes as they see fit. Just pm me and I will working with you.

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Apr
6th
2014

Fantasia Archsage Reviews "Of Trees And Wild Beasts" · 5:55pm Apr 6th, 2014

Of Trees And Wild Beasts

Written by Xhoral1865

Reviewed by Fantasia Archsage


Okay guys, so we’re back again with another review from the Fantasia Archsage Review or “FAR” series, and I’m here to present to you “Of Trees And Wild Beasts”. It’s one-shot narration so there isn’t going to much to say about this one.

Now I have to say I was really impressed by the read of this story. Most definitely because I’m quite of fan of good headcanon stories, one of the reasons why I write the story “The Known World”.

Again the story starts off with fairly good narration and enough to keep you hooked to the middle and closer to the end where everything get really interesting. The time is set to where Discord was ruling Equestria. And you know, I like how this author really makes the events from the show really interesting and adds more depth to the actual story. I like that very much.

This definitely could pass a great world-building story, and I think I might ask the author for permission on further expanding the race. I would love to do some more expanding on this wonderfully written headcanon.

This author truly has some craft at writing good headcanons, and I think you should all give this story some love and actually read it for the amazing idea it offers. This is once again a narration story. I didn’t see any mistakes and there’s nothing I could really say other than the narration was done nicely, and it’s worth a read.

One last thing I would like to say is that the author really has some good ways of describing things so if you guys have trouble describing places or things that are generally not seen before you could look for a bit on how to do so within this story for bettering your own skills. And, I’m done.

This is the Fantasia Archsage Review or “FAR” series and this is “Of Trees And Wild Beasts” written by Xhoral1865 and reviewed by Fantasia Archsage (me). Comment, share to the world, and follow me if you’re not already. I had to throw in the last part for flow, you can disregard that. Thank you guys for reading. Go check out the story, I think you guys would like for a short read :D If you have a story you would like to be reviewed, drop that also in the comment questions below.

Remember to give this author and this story some love and for the comment question of this blog.

In what season do you think Scootaloo would learn to fly?

That’s all for now. Comment if you want your question to be posted up as the next blog. Have fun answering and stay around for the next review :)

Note: I might do the review of stories more than twice a week. I’ll just let it go and see how much I’m able to do. Later all. :twilightsmile:

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Comments ( 5 )

Just a comment cause the blog looks lonely after I read your review. :twilightsmile:

1986457 It actually wouldn't if people actually answered the question in bold and posted links to their story :derpytongue2:

1986459
lol true, but I don't have an answer for your ship question in the last one. :twilightblush:

And Scoot's won't ever learn to fully fly till like the last season they do probably.

1986467 Well you could put up a question you want answered in the latest blog for next blog question of the blog :3 I put those questions to get people posting their questions and stories they would live reviewed :3

1986471
good point. Hmmm, a question.. umm... Why is Topaz such a ditz? :twilightblush: j/k... Oh I know, why is Hasbro to lazy to make an official map of Ponyville.:twilightsmile:

As for reviews, I don't really have any stories for you. The ones I generally read are longer, and most are not finished, and mine's does not even have chapter 1 published.

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