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JawsOnYou67


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  • 185 weeks
    Fall of Equestria, New Eden's Hives!

    So I am making some major alterations to the way that New Eden, the major protagonist towards the Caribou, will be created by. Mainly that they will be made up of multiple hives. As well as an overall change. Basically it will be governed by a series of Entities. The Overmind, Undermind, and Hivemind make up the overall tribunal of minds that control New Eden. They in turn

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  • 189 weeks
    Fall of Equestria Roleplay Discord Group: Seeking New Members! ·

    A Slice of Life/Combat focused Roleplay universe. With darker themes and in some cases depressing scenarios. Not for the faint of heart but applicable for the serious role players here or the lewd ones.

    Really it’s a toss up on which you feel like delving into. Feel free to ask questions about the universe.

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  • 352 weeks
    Fall of Equestria: Strange Chances Update

    Salutations and Greetings to those of you whom for the past few years have been loyal readers of my stories. Though I only have one now since I've taken the others down do not fear and do not fret. Since the creation of this story in June I have worked diligently on it in several assorted accounts that range from the story itself to brain storming ideas for it. As of late I haven't had much in

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  • 375 weeks
    Salutations and tentacles

    It has been such a long time since I was last truly active on this site. No this isn't about me returning, I'm even more busy then I was in the past. With work the way it is I have been given even more time there so my time online is limited to one or two days a week at most. That being said, I wanted everyone who is still Following me to know my stories are still there, they have not been

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  • 408 weeks
    Profile Completelt changed

    Added so much more content to my Profile!

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Apr
4th
2014

A message to all Readers and enjoyers of "Careful What you Wish For" · 5:36pm Apr 4th, 2014

Now, before I receive thumbs downs and dislikes for the next chapter when it comes out. I want you all to know that I will be introducing something very special to me. Think of it as an Oc, but its not Pony in any way. It may seem extremely Op but the fact of the matter is that I've been developing this character for two years now. That being said, I do hope you enjoy what I have in store next chapter, I promise it will be quite action packed.

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Jikes that sounds bad. Seems Op+developing for years is code for extreme mary sue. Add the very special to me, and its shit tier self insert/fantasy fulfillment. If it the character has sex with main characters/dates them (exc actions I cant think off on top of my head(the creepy stuff)), then yea, its probably bad. Developing for years usually means that you no longer realize how bad it is. It might not be the case but.., Yea it usually is.

On unrelated note, I have no idea why I am following you. Good luck and have fun!

1981606 It's not OP in the sense that "O it has some form of interaction with a main character" as more "Well that makes sense but I'm going to call it that due to the fact you beat me in a Rp fight." Really I probably shouldn't use Op to describe him, I've seen OP Ocs, and then I look at my own, I usually guage things like power, abilites, personality, history, and interactions. I have limited my expantion of this Oc over these two years, and focused more on personality and History then actual powers. Building alliances and friendships instead of amassing power. While he is still powerful in my opinion, he isn't some unstoppable juggernaut that will tear through the Sisters with ease. I've seen Pony ocs as well as other ocs of other races and I am happy to say I can see the faults with my own, a long time age. I understand you're opinion and respect it, but when I was saying Op I was only refering to the only ability he posses that would be OP, everything else is pretty standard and came with the character, He's more based on an already established temple, so that I could limit what I could do with him and keep from going over board with him.

As for why you were following me, I do believe it was for one of my other stories that is currently on Hiatus, perhaps Nightmare Moon's Champion, Library of Forbidden Secrets, or Mathias'es Journey. Either way I hope you enjoyed those stories while you were Following me and I wish you luck as well in the future. :pinkiehappy:

1981606 Correction it was Malkior's Journal, though I've been swamped with IRL things and haven't had the time to do much Fantasy Warhammer research. :pinkiesad2:

1981651 O yea that thing was sweet. I hope you will write some more of it someday :pinkiehappy:

1981658 O you can bet I will, I have a crap ton of files dedicated to it, from actual simulated battles to deaths, size of armies, the whole shebang, though my Warhammer Fantasy, Mark of Chaos, Battle March is slow as hell. I'm planning to work on that along with Nightmare Moon's Champion as soon as I finish my current two.

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