Apr
1st
2014
Going down. · 2:33am Apr 1st, 2014
'Shining Like the Sun' will be going down sometime for an unspecified amount of time. Basically, the sex scene is completely unnecessary and it actually bothers me at night. I will take it down around midnight and it will be going back up after a few days after (unless I decide to add more in which case we might somehow get a little peak into their future, though that is unlikely as I feel doing that will actually hurt the story). Sorry to just spring it up like this, but wanted to give fair warning to those who liked it and give them time (if they for some reason liked it) to talk me out of it. See ya when it is back up (or my mind is changed).
i haven't read it yet! and i don't have time!
I actually agree with this. I thought the sex scene was pretty out of place in this fic. I think it'll be a better story overall without it.
1970983 Well you person with a correct name, it will be going up again, just without the sex part of it.
1971148
oh ok.
was the sex scene really that bad?
1971154 wasn't bad, just not good and somewhat out of place.
1971162
ah, will it be a different story or....
1971166 no, will just rewrite the ending from sex to cuddle basically. Nothing drastic.