One Stormy Afternoon updated!

Hi all!

The story "One Stormy Afternoon" has been updated, this time with two chapters.

While this one's been a lot of fun, I probably clocked the most time I have yet into editing just two chapters. Parts of it didn't feel right, the pace a bit uneven, so I read... and reread, and reassembled. Ultimately, I'm happy with how it came out, but it was quite frustrating to have on the cutting board for so long.

It's partially because of people's interest in this story that I even continued it. There were a number of technical issues with the opening that I resolved before first posting the story, and while it was neat to rewrite and retool, it took a while to get to it. I found giving it a little time, then going back helped significantly

Good news is I'm considering doing a sequel already. Since "One Stormy Afternoon" focuses on Apple Jack and Rainbow Dash (though a good portion of it is about Pinkie) I feel there's a bit more that can be explored via Pinkie. Dunno what I'll call it yet, but it's in the works.

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I now have 73 watchers.... thank you very much for your interest in my stuff!

I like to vary it up some... while it may take me a while to get something out, I try to release a variety of works. They've got their common themes, but I already try something new and go where my voice is taking me at the time.

Peace everypony!