Mar
4th
2014
Chapter 7 edits · 5:54am Mar 4th, 2014
Alright guys, thanks to my new editor, I have now completed a rather large edit of Chapter 7. The chapter as a whole should read much better now, and with fewer mistakes... hopefully. Nothing has really been changed in the Chapter's story itself though so it's more or less the same like I said, just a bit easier to read now and a part or two makes a bit more since. The previous chapters will be getting more or less the same treatment over time. So, now to get back to writing on Chapter 8!
oh this! you edited a chapter of it? Any major changes?
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And I added in a few minor details, such as reactions to the armor and stuff like that. Nothing that really changes the chapter's actuall story though.
Nothing really big, I just took a sledge hammer to the walls of text.
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Okay then. Glad to know you're putting some tlc into it though. ^_^
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Yeah, I know. I'm just glad someone was kind enough to offer their time and help, as you have seen with the other chapters, it's... kinda dicey.
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Yep. I won't lie about that.
Thumbs-up! Even the though the additions are fairly minor, I'm glad to see them. They help flesh out the chapter and scenes.
Edits for chapter 2 will be along in a week or so.
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Thank ya. Ill get to work soon on the first.