On the delay for chapter 2 · 4:54am May 14th, 2012
To those whom I made wait an excessive time for chapter 2:
I apologize. I understand it might seem irresponsible to take a month to write ~3000 words, and I assure you it did not take all this time to write it (only took the last few days actually). School had become excruciatingly consuming of my time for the 3 weeks after submitting chapter 1. So, I'm sorry for the terribly long wait and will try to make it up by pushing out a few chapters in relatively rapid succession now that I will have a good block of free time before my schedule becomes busy (no where to the level of last month hopefully) once again.
So, for those of you who want see the next chapter before it I decide it is finalized for publishing, you may join me on the Google Docs page here. It is currently at stage of second/final edits and small changes to diction and missed error, but the current part of the story will not change unless I decide it absolutely must.
Also, it has comments enabled in the event that you want to raise direct questions to me, on apart in particular, or even help with small grammar errors if you wish to do so (I do have others who will aid with this).