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Ayin


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  • 607 weeks
    Next chapter will be a much longer while...

    A huge mixture of things is making me put this story on hiatus. At the moment and in my mind it is cancelled, but there is the slimmest chance where I might do something with this story again.

    If I revisit any parts of this, it would most likely involve a complete rewrite from chapter one or simply be a new story with similar elements, events, and/or characters.

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  • 609 weeks
    Next chapter will be a while.

    Sorry all, but I haven't even started the next chapter and will be off the grid for a couple of weeks. I will try to get it done as soon as possible and hope to be able to write following parts quickly.

    Enjoy the remainder of your summers (or winters).

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  • 616 weeks
    Fourth chapter is out and first got slightly rewritten.

    The fourth chapter is out. Enjoy more Trixie and pals.

    Also, I went through the first chapter and tried to rewrite it a little bit, trim some of the fat, and change the voice a bit. Nothing remotely important has changed, but I deemed it necessary to do some quality control on it while my "editor" reviewed the fourth.

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  • 619 weeks
    On the delay for chapter 2

    To those whom I made wait an excessive time for chapter 2:

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Aug
7th
2012

Next chapter will be a much longer while... · 12:30pm Aug 7th, 2012

A huge mixture of things is making me put this story on hiatus. At the moment and in my mind it is cancelled, but there is the slimmest chance where I might do something with this story again.

If I revisit any parts of this, it would most likely involve a complete rewrite from chapter one or simply be a new story with similar elements, events, and/or characters.

Before I explain why, I want to say sorry that I dragged it out before choosing to do this. I've had this feeling of just stopping since sometime in between the second and third chapter, but I hate not finishing things so I stupidly charged ahead in hopes of getting past the feeling.

Now as to why (since I don't like leaving things unexplained):

I hit a point where what was written left me wonderfully disgruntled. Rather than writing out chapters, I mostly coughed them out painfully and/or slowly, hoping that I'd fix it along the way. In between having changed the middle and end four or so times now, I feel (i.e., will unflinchingly believe forever) what I finally settled on made the first half a waste of words. That and the belief of the first ending was almost worse than Twilight (not the adorkable unicorn). Every time I found an ending I liked, I realized everything before a point still had almost nothing to do with it or failed to build up to it in a decent way at all.

So among attempts to fix everything and unsuccessfully charting a new path, I find no motivation to continue this as it is, but may take it and make something completely new from the corpse it has become. If I do eventually find a way keep the first half relevant and decide continue Trixie's story, I will come back to it. I Pinkie Pie swear with all the cupcakes in the world on that.

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Sorry I know this is a little late but, I just wanted to let you know that I have loved this story and the way you write a story. I'm not trying to persuade you to continue before you think so. I'm just throwing it out there that I appreciate that you've written even this much of the story and, that even if it is never finished, I do hope you'll continue to write other stories I'll definitely be looking forwards to anything you may write in the future! :twilightsmile:

Also you right she is adorkable!

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