Revival II

So, I'm back, hopefully for good this time.
If I'm ever kinda gone for what seems like forever, know I'll be back in a month... or... three... ish...
Anyways, I'm really sorry about that, I'm back to working on the story revising and it's going to be epic.
(I only know it will be epic because I still remember the little plot things I was going to do... )

In any case, I hope that the newer version is appealing and, overall, better.

If it's not, rant your frustrations
If it is tell me what you like
this color scheme looks like christmas

That is, when it's updated, taking it off Hiatus, placing it in incomplete, brace for the next chapter.
(In a week, always in a week)
How about a haiku?

Crash
The wind held me up
and yet I let myself fall
the next time I'll think