Character List (OC)

Oopsie, I can't help but write this. I'm jumbled up on each character and adding more isn't going to solve much. Instead, I'm posting here. Its easier than taking time out the story I'm doing by intervening at one time to do a chapter on characters. Very dumb on my part.
ALPHABETICAL ORDER:
Amethyst Locket:Check Mate's mother. Very worried about her daughter and works very hard at what she intends to do. She's distraught over her daughter's disappearance highly to the point of break down.
Brick Stack:Mentioned character that doesn't listen to what they ask. Will be questioned.
Check Mate:A studious, young unicorn filly that loves ponies with passion. Very trusting to a fault. She was a high end productive school pony and tried her hooves at anything. She had an intimate relationship between Triple Strike and Solar Blitz.
Cookie Cutter:She's a student from the class, murdered by them.
Dead Bolt:A mare now that told us about the two. Basically suspects Brick Stack and Steel Wing.
Demi:Well, she's a very patient, rapey mare that loves what she does. Second in command to Laughing. Can't wait positively for the burnouts to leave.
Diamond Ring:Silver's father and wealthy stallion. He's very secretive and calls his missing wife a "Mare for hire."
Fractured Prism:Grey coated purple and brown maned. He's an earth pony. He's a sidekick to Swift Kick. Though, much dumber. Fractured is related to both. He's the eldest but dumbest sadly. (More innocent then the others, but still bad.) He's innocent in a sad way.
Laughing Gas:She's a mare totally out for revenge. She's bloodthirsty and cares for one. She's a Demi admirer and cold. She doesn't care for Scatenata either way. (Expand later)
Mantua-Maker:Check's classmate.
Mineral Glass:Same as Sour Drop.
Pirouette:She's Scootaloo's mother. She's highly egotistical and dramatic. Her passion is anything artsy, but has a fondess towards one thing in particular. She's a wealthy mare but has little respect towards anypony-even her own foals. She's not very well loved by none of her family and highly regarded as something to be feared.
Pick Pocket:She's Scootaloo's older sister. She's cold at first, caring little about herself until she changes and does show some care for her sister. She revealed certain details.
Pretty Penny:Creation of Demi and Laughing Gas. She's sweet and loving, almost like a baby in a way. She's Scootaloo's sort of daughter. She's always snuggled into her at some point.
Orange Julius:Yellow coated with orange mane. He's bulkier then Mr.Cake but lankier then Big Mac. He's the youngest but the smartest out of the siblings. Swift Kick and Orange have frustrations between each other.
Rainbow Shine:He's a very intimate stallion in love with Scootaloo. He works on the case, scarily.
Silver Brooch:She's younger than Silver Spoon-there's a reason she's mentioned.
Silver Lining:A mare that disappeared, she worked in a silver industry. She had three kids: Silver Soon, Silver Locket and Silver Brooch.
Silver Locket:Oldest sibling and worker of the store. She knows of Silver and she's highly afraid almost. She's hiding everything back.
Sonnet:She's Check Mate's older sister in a way. She's there for her when needed-high attachment.
Solar Blitz:Check's "partner" and student. She's second to die. She's mentioned constantly and will be later.
Sour Drop:Victim of the two.
Stone Quarry:Same as the other victims.
Swift Kick:He's dark yellow with an orange and brown mane. (despite not having that mentioned.) Quite furious and quick tempered. He is willing to do anything to make sure he's the winner. He's the manipulator, manipulating Fractured under his hoof. He's an earth pony. Dick pony.
TELL ME IF I FORGOT SOME