Woven Right Chapter 1 Edit

Thanks to an awesome brony named Fletcher Coates, also known as the author of Giving Love a Helping Hoof, for giving some much needed suggestions that provided a great revision of the first chapter. This is now a much smoother and more eloquently written piece now. Future chapters can be expected to reflect the first in quality.

Most important, thanks to everypony who has begun reading and tracking my story, you've all given me a very warm welcome and positive reception for my first time writing in what has easily been years. I promise to put together a story that everypony should be happy with and most important, one that is 'worthy' of the ratings it's been getting.

Thanks and goodnight.

-OhYouFoal

EDIT: Oh horseapples, I also forgot to mention OminousBrony (or whatever the hay his name is on here) for an awesome job in editing my work. He bears with a lot of frustrations I send his way from my somewhat broken/awkward writing style and you have HIM to thank for making the necessary edits to the story into the quality it's at now.

So yeah, 50/50 split on the credit due here. Fletcher and Ominous, you're both really AWESOME bronies.