Nov
8th
2013
KH:FIM Rewrite · 5:14am Nov 8th, 2013
Just wanted to let the readers of KH: FIM know that I've trimmed the first chapter down to shreds, completely removing the backstory of the kingdom hearts games, and I've instead told the story of discovering Terra, Aqua, and Ventus in a much shorter and simpler way. As in, about three sentences. Read chapter five again for that. I'm also trying to remove as many image dumps as possible, all except for the images of the ponys' keyblades. So, if you notice anymore pictures while reading, let me know and I'll see what I can do to remove them and see how that will effect the story.
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Mudkipman98 · 244 views
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So Mudkip seen any clop recently
Oh, that explains why you havent updated in a while.
I personally would reccomend removing the images of the keyblades as well and just have more detailed descriptions of them, and then have a link to my gallery at the authors notes at the end of the chapter so that people that want to see them more clearly can do that there, the reason i say that is because an image in the middle of a written story kinda shatters any sort of immersion one might have in the story (which is why, im sure, youre removing the other images), but thats just my oppinion.
1490889 no, those sort of stories aren't my thing. I have nothing against those who do read clop but its not my thing.
1491838 Joking Mudkip. Say hey to Dina