Sep
25th
2013
Recovered, Now Stuck · 11:47pm Sep 25th, 2013
Thanks everypony for your patience while I let my poor hands recover from the mess I brought down on myself. My palms and skin have repaired themselves, and I can type without it hurting or itching like mad now.
Now, I'm kind'a stuck and thought I'd reach out for a bit of help from you guys. I'm a bit stuck on "Under the Bed" as well as "The Return of Princess Nightmare Moon". I've not the foggiest where to take them from where they are. If you guys have any input I'd love to hear it, so I can go ahead and finish them in a more timely manner than I have been writing in lately.
Thanks much for all your support while I was feeling owchie!
~Aegis
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the monster rolls a 100 and breaks then the mane 6 win and any that had sex have to do a preg roll check
I'll have to go re-read the latest chapters. I'll get back to you on this!
Aliens.
princess nightmare moon, you're att h e stage where anime would insert a love rival...
Hey, keep taking it easy as long as you need. I can attest to it myself...
I'd say go with whatever story is poking your brain more.
for "under the bed" i htink yiu should make it a twist at the end making the mane 6 lose.
let mw clarify, The mane six win and celabete then slowly get blurry and it shows twilight and her friends on the ground wit hechoing evil laughter. it would make a big twist!
Table both and start on the sequel to Let the Silence Sing
Well, I haven't read under the bed because I generally don't like horror, but as for Nighty...
Hmm....
), but it helps if I got a foundation to build on.
If you want, send me a PM with anything you may already have. I am not too bad at the conceptual level for story telling (it's actually writing the damned things that befuddle me.
1376077 I second that motion.
Well, if Band Aid is good enough for a princess, then clearly there is something about him that is apparently desirable/important, even if the onlooker doesn't know what it is yet.
"Who is this strange stallion being woo-d by a princess? I don't care - If she wants him, I want him."
Romantic rivals aplenty!
Who are you and why do you dare bother my notification tab?
Aegis, I don't exactly know what could happen next but maybe if you make a list of stuff that won't happen, it might help narrow down the list or maybe even get a new idea from that. Just a suggestion.
You don't have an outline for the stories?
I would stick with the family shenanigans, I mean his sisters have to leave at some point right? They should totally tell his parents about his new romantic interest, and if his sisters are anything to go on, his mom will be a pushy, controlling, over protective Nightmare(heh, heh), so something like that should happen. And definitely a part where the Princess, is getting cross examined by all of the females in his life, while his father and him go have male bonding moments or something, and she talks about the time he brutally beat to near-death two of the personal changeling guards to the Big Cheese herself, and the time he told her, and her ego to go jump off a cliff.
Also it seems like underneath that meek, and timid shell of his, is a lot of pent up frustration, and a sizable temper, maybe him and his dad have that in common. To steal from Jack Nicholson, "There are two kinds of angry people in the world: explosive and implosive. Explosive is the kind of individual you see screaming at the cashier for not taking their expired coupons. Implosive is the cashier who remains quiet day after day taking all of the abuse from all of the customers until they snap and finally shoot everyone in the store." Bandaid is the cashier...Anyway those are just some of my thoughts, I'm just chock full of them, but whatever you come up with will be fine with me.
1375883 what the f
1452686 sorry I have been playing a lot of PnP tabletop so at time that's all that I can think of is roll checks