Jul
24th
2013
A Big Story Gets a Little Editing · 6:58pm Jul 24th, 2013
A fine fellow by the name of JustAnotherTimeLord said a whole lot of critical words in a few chapters about my story, so I did what I usually do and conscripted him to edit it. (Naw, he offered to. But watch your backs.) He helped me tweak out a whole bunch of little things about it, like at least 300 things, maybe 340. Besides some grammar derps, the scene at the end of A Tree in Canterlot got expanded to hopefully get Sweetie's reasoning across better, and I added a scene at the start of the epilogue. Maybe some other things I'm forgetting; the editing took a while.
So give the story a re-read and see if it's improved for ya any.
I thought it worked just fine before. I see no reason to re read it
I don't like to re-read stories :/ But glad to hear it's even better now.
Fine. If you insist...
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Indeed, it most certainly worked fine the first way through. Which is why the only thing that would need reading is the added scene on the last chapter, just because it is entirely new. The rest of the story was just scene touch ups, grammar fixs; the works. It will just make it easier on the eyes for any and all who decide to reread it or read it for the first time.
TL is awesome like that! I already loved the story (yes, even the ending) but I'll read-again because good things are worth enjoying twice.
I mostly want to see a sequel where Sweetie Belle finds a note from Twilight in the past (say when she is OLD) about the beginnings of the bad things that are going to be happening in the future and to be sure to keep that earth pony amulet etc. Sweetie Belle then has the choice -- she has a new life in the future. How much of it is she willing to put on the line to prove a theory by her surrogate mother, and how deep does the rabbit hole actually go?