Jul
3rd
2013
My Growing Insanity! · 6:08am Jul 3rd, 2013
For those of you who're just as insane as I am, I've edited two plot holes out of the story. (At least I think I have - it's kind of hard to tell when you're this nuts.) The first is in chapter 5, part 1 where Etherea randomly knows the names of several ponies in English. Yeah, nobody caught that, not even me initially. But it still bothered me... The second was the whole phone issue in chapter 6, but it should make more sense now.
They're changes to small parts of the two chapters, but for those of you who are curious enough, there they are.
awesome! later its time for a reread! 8D
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Cool, I really like the new bit with the names - Phonetically, or morpheme-wise or whatever, they sound pretty appropriate.
I didn't spot the change in the last chapter, though, about the phone. Was it just the guy being less sure it was Alex's roommate on the phone?
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No. Alex just had her hold on to his phone, both of them completely ignoring the fact that she wouldn't be able to understand anyone who answered her call.