Slow going

Two chapters in and I'm already feeling the creative spark flowing back...those of you who do write know what I'm talking about. However, the side effect of that is the need to take ones time. I'm happy with the content of both chapters, however I feel that the second chapter is a tad rushed...so as well as working on the next chapter I am also having a proof-reader go over the previously published chapters.

And once I'm done with the 3rd chapter it will also go under the microscope before it gets put up here.better quality means better story and less stupidness.