THE COMMENTARY ON: Discorded Humanity · 1:26am Jun 12th, 2013
be wary, if you haven't read it, subtle spoilers are dead ahead.
the way I wrote this was quite sporadic, I want the reader to literally feel like they were sitting in my caffeine addled mind.
the concept of the whole thing was originally quite simple.
Hero winds up in equestria, saves world, gets girl.
But then I decided to be a bastard.
I was also still quite hooked on naruto at the time. Using an asshole of a set up. I tore the character from his new home and threw him back to earth, kicking and screaming.
from then on... His life would be a down hill spiral of self sacrifice and death.
at the start of it all, I was half thinking of keeping it as a fun filled romp of an adventure.
but then I thought no...
In episode one, or Discorded humanity, he would fight a corrupted discord.
episode two a corrupted griffin representative
episode three was a dark king intent on enslaving millions once again....
the finale..... well....
Spoilers