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  • 474 weeks
    Moondancer Warnings Updated

    Just to let you know, I got bored and added some extra stuff to some unpublished chapters to the Moondancer story. Basically, there's a brief transformation thingy (M/F) (regular clop readers should not be offended), and some very badly acted Daring Do role-play, and, uh, some weird body-writing thing that made sense at the time.

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  • 521 weeks
    Epilogue Updated, What's Next and Solicitation for Comments

    Hi Everyone,

    Sorry for the extended silence. Knight of Cerebus and I have finally gotten the epilogue proof-read and updated. The changes are fairly minor, but if you're curious to see what a difference the proofing makes, please feel free to take another look at the final chapter and see if you can spot any differences.

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    5 comments · 455 views
  • 545 weeks
    By request - Raising the Moon

    <Author's Note> The following section was not and will never be canon for Twilight's Plan. But it could have been. The section has not been proofread or edited.</Author's Note>

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    4 comments · 533 views
  • 547 weeks
    Excised Bit From Next Chapter

    So I'm having to do some fairly brutal editing of the next chapter in the wake of the emergency chapter. Unfortunately, that means I have to cut out bits of the story that I actually kinda liked. For the curious, please find below part of one section that I've decided to delete. This is a first draft and has not been proofread, but I include it to show that I am working on this. Very rough

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  • 551 weeks
    New update

    Hi Guys,

    This is an update, and you know what that means (or at least you do if you've read the other postings on this blog). There will be a slight delay before the next chapter is posted. The chapter is written, but Knight of Cerebus has a lot on his plate at the moment and he won't be able to take a look at it for a couple of weeks. I apologise for the delay.

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May
4th
2013

Delay · 2:02pm May 4th, 2013

Okay, apologies for this. I had plotted out a complete story arc for Twilight's Plan, but have realised when writing (actually completed the first draft of the next chapter) that it was no longer in keeping with the tags - I'd gone from 'Romance' to 'Adventure'. I didn't think that the story itself was that bad, but I've spent the last two days trying to work out how to move forward. I think I'll have to ditch about half of the chapter and start again. I'll also have to replot the whole story arc all over again.

The problem is the silly redo spell from the first chapter, when TP was originally envisaged to be a one-shot. Now I either go 'Adventure' and use the 'redo' spell for Groundhog Day type shenanigans (the specifics of which I haven't planned) or else forget about it and focus on the 'Romance'. I really don't think that a 'redo' spell works well in a relationship setting - it just causes pain and confusion.

So I may have to skip a week and post the next update next weekend, giving me time to try and untangle this mess.

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Comments ( 1 )

well when I was reading it, I thought the spell was mostly there as a backup for her to make sure she could get Luna.

As she now has her mare, there is no further immediate use for the spell. I dont' think she would forget it, but rather store it away just in case she ever needed it agin. As Twilight is such a smart mare, she would happily learn other high end spells too. But you could always have a scene later on for some shenanigans.

What would get fun is if she tells Luna about the spell and they have some fun with it together...
Im totally up for a lot of romance, with a little (or a lot of) adventure.

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