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  • 509 weeks
    What type of story is Dogs, anyway?

    I marked it as an Adventure, but that doesn't quite feel right. Sure, the Diamond Dogs are on an adventure into strange and foreign lands from their point of view, but does that count if they're treading ground with which the readers are already familiar? Since we're seeing the world through their eyes, I want this to feel like an adventure, but I'm not sure I've succeeded so far.

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  • 557 weeks
    Mare Doloris Ch. 18 edited

    One of my readers was helpful enough to point out that the narrator forgets about the audio evidence he gathered in the previous chapter.* After reviewing, I find I agree that he shouldn't have done that. I made some edits and added some dialogue to the latest chapter (18: "Convalescence") in an attempt to fix this

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  • 560 weeks
    Excerpt from a fic I was working on pre-fimfiction

    Sorry for the long lack of updates to both stories. By way of apology, and to try and get myself motivated again, I present an excerpt from an old, old fic I started working on way back between seasons 2 and 3. If you remember some of my old blog posts, this is from the HiE that got to around 90 pages before I decided it needed a rewrite. In this scene, the story's major villains, recently

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  • 566 weeks
    Unofficial Mare Doloris Theme Song

    If it was in a a different medium, each episode would close to this ditty by Bombadil. I could see parts of it applying to both principal characters in different ways.

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  • 573 weeks
    Readers: Does Spirits Need a Dark Tag?

    After I published chapter eleven of The Spirits of Harmony, reader Majk commented to say:

    I'm really having a blast reading this story but methinks it deserves a dark tag. All that mindbucking done by spirits is kinda grim and gets more scary the more you think about it (but that could be just me).

    as to what was most disturbing:

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Apr
7th
2013

Good news, Spirits fans! · 1:24am Apr 7th, 2013

After too long a hiatus and many more chapters churned out on my other fic (which is so different from Spirits I'm loath to recommend it) I'm back to working on a new chapter for The Spirits of Harmony.

Coming up in chapter 9, Pinkie returns with actual help, royalty gets involved, and Twilight Sparkle learns more about what in Equestria's going on, thanks to the mixed blessing of incorporeality and an uncooperative yet strangely knowledgeable filly. Maybe more depending on how long it takes to tell all that stuff.

Stay tuned!

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