Fair Warning · 4:39pm Mar 7th, 2013
To all of those who are reading the First and Second Journeys, I find myself at a point where I think I am not content with what I have written in the stories. I will still continue the series, but I may go back and partially rewrite some chapters. Making things less rushed, change around the timeline a bit to make more sense, and generally alter what I am disappointed in. Any chapters I edit I will mark in the titles, allowing it to be easier to see what has been changed.
A POINT I WILL CLEARLY MAKE THOUGH: The story itself wont change. The plot and events will stay the same, just wording will be altered. Part of the reason I will be doing this as well, is I do not have any notes on my story besides a couple ideas. I am going to have a pen and paper handy as I do this, taking down notes.
Plus, I never really put in much foreshadowing or stuff like that, so I want to see about fitting some.
Again, no major changes to the story, I just want to improve it. Let me know how you feel about this, if you don't mind. Any pointers and ideas you have as well, feel free to send me a private message, and I will consider adding it. I will give credit in the authors notes where applicable if you do.
Regards,
~Ink
