Review: Wake up. See this. What do? · 4:02am Mar 3rd, 2013
For the past few days I've been reading a story called Wake up See this. What do? The whole basis of the story is ridiculous, but that, in my eyes, is the point of the story. Anyway, let's get down to business, shall we?
Grammar: 76/100. I edit this story, and it is getting better, but the grammar overall isn't too great.
Plot: 65/100. The plot is plain ridiculous. Of course, the plot only goes where the comments take it, so this may be a bit inaccurate.
Writing: 70/100. The writing is not too great, but I'm trying to stop the slop. Overall, I personally like the writing, because it fits well with the story.
Well, definitely the lowest-scoring story I've reviewed so far. But, however, I have to give it a 20-point bonus in compensation for the viewers deciding the plot. That leave the grand total at... 231/300, ranking at excellent! I'd read this story, if I were you.
Lolz, yeah I'd call this a fair review. Especially considering I'm not really trying with it.
883356 Really? "Lolz?" Shame.