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Kiro0613


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Feb
28th
2013

Review: A Cup of Philosophy · 5:16am Feb 28th, 2013

Hello, ladies, gentlemen, and variations thereupon! (Especially bisexual frenchmen.) I've decided to start a review system. Today I red a cute little story called A Cup of Philosophy. Not too bad a story, but let's see what the final number is. Now, for those of you that don't know, (pretty much everyone,) I have 3 categories, each with 100 points max. I review each category separately, and I decide the verdict from all the points combined. So, onto business!

Grammar: 88/100 (Rank: Great!) I've sent an error report to the author. This should clear up some problems. There were only a few words that didn't belong occasionally. Not a big problem.
Writing: 86/100 (Rank: Okay) Pretty good writing. Paragraphs are spaced out EXCELLENTLY, which I love. There has definitely been better writing, and this had some sloppy writing moments, but all-around good.
Plot: 72/100: (Rank: Decent) Could be better. I don't like that this is based on Pinkie Watches Paint Dry. If not for that, it would have scored higher, but still generally okay.

So, the grand total is... drum roll please... 246/300! Ranking: Excellent! This was a pretty great read. I'd strongly recommend this to someone with a few minutes on their hands (Or hooves, if you prefer).

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