A Different Doctor's Dinner Date Drama · 9:31pm Mar 1st, 2013
So, I was recently inspired by an excellent collab suggestiong from the Collab Cage. The idea was to write a shipping story were the pair in question have problems, are unrequited, or just plain break up.
So, I wrote Doctor Whooves Dumps... Who?
Not only is it about Doctor Whooves trying to save his relationship, its a mystery. I leave hints thoroughout the story to "her" identity before I reveal it at the end. Can you figure out who she is? I really enjoyed the challenge. Have to do something weird like this again.
So, if you like the Doctor, romance, angst, or potential for heart-break, give it a try.
No spoilers in the comment, please! Tell me if you figure it out, though.
It was fun working it out. After the date started, I made my guess. Had a small list. 3 potentials based on the clues given. (There weren't many.) After that, it was mostly process of elimination. Looks like I read the clues well enough though, combined with a surprising bit of luck on my part. My number 1 ended up being right.
There were a couple of parts were I thought you had just made the reveal though, and those threw me for a loop. In a good way. It was a fun story to read.
Also FEELS.
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Ugh. I'm going to have to look at that.
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"There were a couple of parts were I thought you had just made the reveal though, and those threw me for a loop."
I was hoping for that. As drafted, the story kind of wandered through a lot of scenes like the library, but I thought the endless flashbacks would have gotten repetitive.