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pjabrony


My name's PJ. I'm from New York. I write pony fics. I go to parties with bronies. I'm not good at self-introduction.

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Jan
29th
2013

Thoughts on Alicorn Twilight · 8:02pm Jan 29th, 2013

So, it looks more and more like Twilight’s going to become an alicorn. Even Tara Strong confirmed it on Twitter. Count me among those who aren’t happy about this. But I’m also following the advice of those who say that I should wait and see before I judge. Still, I’m not happy, and when I’m not happy, putting my thoughts down helps me. I’m doing it here so it’s not lost among the morass of comments on EQD and Ponychan.

The season finale was written by M.A. Larson. Larson episodes like Magic Duel and It’s About Time are generally very good at entertaining, but very bad at being unpredictable. And I’m hoping something unpredictable happens, because all the courses that I would call obvious are problematic.

Course 1: Twilight gets her wings, then loses them or gives them up.

Problem: How is it fair to Twilight to give her something awesome, then take it away? It’s also saying that she deserves to be awesome, but doesn’t get to enjoy it.

Course 2: Twilight gets her wings, joins Celestia, Luna, and Cadance as princesses.

Problem: A barrier has now been established between her and all the non-princess ponies on the show. Set aside the question of immortality for the moment, since the show probably won’t address it. Why does Twilight deserve to be a princess and not Fluttershy for reforming Discord? Zecora for stopping Ponyville from becoming Trixieville? Rarity for putting up with not getting her own episode?

Course 3: Twilight (possibly with Cadance joining her) takes over for Celestia and Luna, who ascend to a higher plane of existence. The Willy Wonka ending.

Problem: Why do C. and L. have to leave? Why can’t they rule over Equestria forever? Nopony dislikes them, in fact, everypony loves them. MLP should be about building things through friendship, not about having to give things up.

Course 4: Twilight gets her wings, then pulls off her Mission Impossible disguise to reveal that she was really Derpy the whole time.

Problem: Only that it won’t happen.

As I said, I will wait and see. But generally MLP:FiM lives up to my expectations. No less, but no more. I hope for once it has more.

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Comments ( 15 )

I hope she get's her wings at the beginning of the episode and is confronted with the consequenses.
She would be immortal, but that would mean she would outlive her friends and family.
She would be a princess, but will most certainly have no time for anyone because of this.
Maybe other things too, but my mind isn't coming up with other things right now.
And at the end of the episode she decides, because of the above mentioned reasons, to give up her wings, immortality and being a princess to live a happy life with her friends and family and make the best out of it, mastering adventures, friendship lessons and the normal crazyness of life.
I really hope it ends that way. For the sake of everyone who loves this show, young or adult.
Also I think the gusy from Hasbro should consider making My Little Dashie into a movie. This story just deserves it.
I know someone is already making this, but they have other possibilities and could make it a big win for everyone.
So I think I wasted enough of your time. See you someday maybe.

Dragon:moustache:

Well that will be interesting to say the least. I just hope they don't get rid of Celestia and Luna.

C'mooooooooooooooooooon "it was all a dream" ending.

If course 3 happens, I'm going to kill someone.
The worst thing of it, is that it actually MAY happen. But I doubt it. The guys running the show are competent. Just because Lauren Faust is not with them, doesn't mean they are going to screw up the show beyond repair. Even if Hasbro is butting in now.
I hope Hasbro understands that alienating the bronies is going to be bad for business. I'm a 31 years physician and I just love the show enough to still pay for stuff in the Gameloft game. I buy ponies monthly, almost. And the important thing here is that I don't need anyone's permission to do this. I have my own money and it IS going to the ponies. The thing is, I don't watch the cartoon because I like the toys, understand?

Well, I have high hopes that this is going to be for the best. I'm not a professional writer and I have been able to make this work in a roleplaying game over chat (waaaay before this came up :pinkiehappy: ) I guess my point is: we should have faith in the guys who make our beloved ponies.

How is it fair to Twilight to give her something awesome, then take it away? It’s also saying that she deserves to be awesome, but doesn’t get to enjoy it.

Because she'll say "friendship is magic" and prefer to be with her friends than the princesses.

Why do C. and L. have to leave? Why can’t they rule over Equestria forever? Nopony dislikes them, in fact, everypony loves them. MLP should be about building things through friendship, not about having to give things up.

>inb4 episode about death and dying

Only that it won’t happen.

Call in the Tactical Fanfiction Squad.

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MLD is sooooo over-rated. If they were gonna make a movie from a fiction there's like a million better stories to use. It just seems like everyone thinks its such a good fic cause everyone else is saying too, it was mediocre at best. Here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/3326/redemption

Also, this:
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It's the sadest story I read until now and A Summer Twilight was sad too, but not as sad as MLD.
I thank you though for bring ing up that story to me. I'll give it a read later on, but have a shitload of things to do for now.
If you know other really heartbreaking sad stories just give me the link. I like to read them once in a while.
I'm currently writing one with Photo Finish and would give you the link to it when I'm far enough with it, if you want to judge how I'm doing.
Also an alicorn Twilight on a flying shark? That's it. We're fucked. :rainbowlaugh:

Dragon:moustache:

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I've spent the last 6 months reading fics all thay I can send you some sad fics.
Also, if you need an editor/proof reader, I'm up for it.

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Bring it on with the sad fics. I have 72 stories on my read later list and 76 chaps within my favs, but I can get them in.
For the editor/proof reader I do thank you and will now give you the links to my stories. One is not published yet and you need the password 'fireball' for it. Third in line it is bythe way. That is also the story I'm not going to change no matter what. The others are free to complain. :rainbowlaugh:
There you go.
1st one.
2nd one.
Aaand 3rd one.
I'm also working on two other stories at the moment, but have not yet digitalized them. Links will follow when they're up.
Hope it's not too much for you and please say what you think about them, but on my user page.
Thank you for the offered help.

Dragon:moustache:

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Also, if you need an editor/proof reader, I'm up for it.

I've spent the last 6 months reading fics all thay I can send you some sad fics.

Just saying.

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true but you must realize im off the clock, im allowed to type like shit....

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Reminds me of the CEO of my company. He's never used a capital letter in an e-mail.

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*Le sigh.....* If you MUST judge my work: Friendship Is Life
Shackles and Friendship

Course 4 would be the most un expected and awsome. Princess Derpy Hooves. Hasbro will never do it look how they just caved on the Derpy issue already no guts . too bad for all of us fans

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