Aight. New Advent Up.

Let's see how this is. Hopefully a better proof at least, though I could still use an actual pre/proofreader.

The more I think about things and fiddle with the overall story arc, the more I like this world, and want to finish it. Of course I tend to write ridiculously non-linearly--aided in my madness by the awesome that is Scrivener--so there are some entire later chapters already done, but it will be a while before we get to them. The ending is actually basically written.

Interestingly, GG Chrysalis suddenly got a big part in the last third of the story. She fits perfectly. Or I'm just a nut.