I need some assistance. If you, yes you dear reader, would read the following short piece (1200 words) and tell me if you find it funny or not, that would be fab. The piece is what is supposed to be the beginning of a novel I'm trying to write, and I'm currently trying to gauge the way in which to write it. (Other criticism is also welcomed.)
First off, I'm sorry, this post is going to be more useless drama, something the internet doesn't really need. So, if you fancy here's the TL;DR... I'm taking a break from writing.
I'm up for it :D
I really, really need something to occupy myself tonight.
This task sounds both productive and fun!
I'm interested.
Thanks guys.
Link:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/10iimjQBWbUmc-L1qxzfAbTIxO8MGxpol5sP1jL5Slys/edit
Also, I kind of caved into witing another sad story, but this one really means something so I don't mind.
Oh yeah, commenting powers aren't available because I thought anyone reading might hate the comments everywhere. Sorry. :(