Luna game Y U NO UPDATE!? · 6:11am Nov 2nd, 2011
Thank you all ... 5 of you ... for liking my story.
To show that my author is, in fact, working on it, here is a little taste of chapter 2.
"Luna woke suddenly, snapping into a sitting position. She looked around, quickly getting to her hooves, and felt her forgotten panic beginning to well up inside her again. The palace was gone, all of the familiar world was gone. In place of her home, she saw a line of tree's on either side of her, far off in the distance. Between her and them was a massive black chasm that gaped hungrily at her on both sides of a thin, grass covered stone path that extended as far as she could see in either direction. The dim light of the featureless sky made it hard to see beyond a certain point, adding to the little blue alicorns paranoia."
What do you think?