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  • 2 weeks
    Eight years

    I have officially been on Fimfiction for 8 years!? It doesn't even feel like it's been that long. Well, I'll probably be writing Fimfiction for another few years. Time flies, and I have to say that despite all the time it takes to write my stories, it's well worth it. I really don't plan on stopping, as this is a way to keep myself busy, and overall, I enjoy writing my crazy stories and seeing

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  • 6 weeks
    Ranking every episode in Season Six based on personal preference.

    Season 6

    1st place: Gauntlet of Fire

    2nd place: To Where and Back Again, parts 1 & 2

    3rd place: The Times are a Changeling

    4th place: The Crystalling Parts 1 & 2

    5th place: Saddle Row & Rec

    6th place: A Hearth's Warming Tail

    7th place: No Second Prances

    8th Place: Stranger than Fan Fiction

    9th Place: The Gift of the Maud Pie

    10th place: Viva Las Pegasus

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  • 6 weeks
    To Where and Back again Parts One and Two

    This is the Season Six Finale, and I have to admit this was really good as it did a fantastic job wrapping up the season's main plot points very well and gave us more world-building with the Changelings. I mainly liked how it was centered around Starlight Glimmer, as most of the episodes focused on her dealing with her past and making amends, and this was the ultimate challenge for her not to

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  • 7 weeks
    Thoughts on Top Bolt

    This is another episode I felt like abit out of place, but I did enjoy watching it as I relate to Vapor Trail a lot. The idea of this episode is mainly centered around two ponies: a shy, somewhat nervous mare named Vapor Trail and a stallion Pegasus, who is rather full of himself named Sky Stinger. The two usually work as a team as new cadets training to be a part of the Wonderbolt Academy, but

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  • 7 weeks
    Thoughts on Where the Apple Lies

    This episode is one that I would not expect to be in season six, but it was one of my favorite episodes in the season, given how it gives us some backstory to the Apples, which I honestly enjoy when an episode focuses on the Apple family. The episode is basiclly a fable to teach Apple Bloom about telling lies and how Applejack got herself into a heap of trouble lying to Filthy Rich about selling

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Feb
6th
2024

Thoughts on "The Fault in Our Cutie Marks" · 2:07am February 6th

This episode is one I really enjoyed a lot as it's about a fun character named Gabby. Gabby is a young, eccentric griffin who is curious and inquisitive in nature. Her infatuation with the Cutie Mark Crusaders and her determination to get a cutie mark is something that is unlike any griffin we've seen so far; most of them are quite angry, greedy, and selfish in nature, so it's quite a shock to see one so spry and selfless. Despite her desire to get a cutie mark, she's more concerned about helping others and even trying to make the Cutie Mark Crusaders feel better when they fail to get her one. The thing that made this episode special is Gabby, and it's the reason I decided to write a short story about her. I wish she had come into the show more, but what little we got of her was great.

Dissecting the montage song about what Gabby is good at.

- helps mix cauldron for Zecora; ok, so this makes sense, but clearly, as she has claws, I can't imagine stirring something with hooves.

- She teaches pre-calculus; she's no older than ten, at least for me. They usually didn't teach this until junior year in high school, so she's quite literally a mathematical genius to me.

- scrubs floors for Rarity; Rarity getting some free labor, lol

-cleans kelps; ok, where is this beach? I'm sure Ponyville is landlocked

- helps with the apple orchard; Applejack getting some free labor XD

- basiclly helping a mother out; my goodness, this was super cute, and dang, did that mom look like she needed the help

- help lift a load for bulk biceps and walked granny across the street; generally just being a good neighbor

- play baseball!? That Weird. I wasn't sure if this would make sense in MLP since they invented buckball. But it works

- assistant dentist? How does she know how to do that!? XD

- cheers up a pony; well, dang, that's just sweet

- does gardening; shows off using her claws once again

- writes music and plays clarinet; if this doesn't scream genius, I don't know what does

-bakes cakes; good to know somepony can bake cakes outside the Cakes themselves and Pinkie Pie.

- sails boats; I am shocked again. Where are they doing this? Ponyville is landlocked. XD.

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