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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Monday
    Did two things this past weekend...

    First, I ran 10k for the first time in two months after laying off that long to let my ankle bursitis subside, trying to allow the area to generally heal up. It appears that it worked. To my delight, there was no ankle pain after and I hadn’t even lost much stamina thanks to hitting an elliptical machine twice a week for an hour instead of jogging. My upper legs are another matter, though.

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  • 6 days
    C&C chapter 40 entering prereads tonight + teaser

    Much as I didn’t want to, I made the decision to break it up since the full length of the War Council meeting had exceeded 20,000 words and will probably approach 25k for the now-two chapters before all is said and done. The breakpoint itself will be between learning about the general war situation both Aricia and the Griffon Kingdom face, and then discussing what in all the Crows they’re going

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  • 1 week
    Midnight Rising/C&C update: April showers may bring May flowers...

    But of more interest is the emergence of 17-year cicadas in my area. Big, ugly, red-eyed insects that are the size of your thumb but basically harmless, as long as you can get past all the shed skins they leave behind on leaves and the everpresent and disconcertly loud background sound they produce as a mating call. Fortunately, the outbreak in my area seems pretty limited. There's a few around,

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  • 2 weeks
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

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  • 4 weeks
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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Jan
18th
2024

Eros up next but C&C is not forgotten... · 5:23pm January 18th

The last release was a success, picking up one new like and a slew of additional tracks, so a warm welcome to new readers! Hope you enjoy the story, both what's already written and going forward. I typically blog about my stories, both to keep readers up to date on release schedules and what to expect in them going forward.

As far as Feathered Hearts goes, a new entry of Eros is up next. I’ve got all these words already written for it, so it’d be a little ridiculous not to finish a chapter of it first, but don't worry: I’m already planning the next chapter of Continuation and Chronicles in my head. It will include a significant amount of borrowed text from the original story for the first time in a while (pulled from chapter 10), but the main scene will be Gilda attending a Council of War which catches her up—and thus the reader—on the overall situation the Kingdom faces. Expect Firefly-style battle and campaign maps to feature prominently as well. They’re a lot of work to make, definitely, but worth it in the end.

Readers of the original story may recall that Gilda bore the rank of Sub-Tribune by chapter 10 and found that she had inherited command of Aricia when the previous Captain was killed, leaving her the ranking officer. Obviously, that's not happened here, but going forward...? Well, she ain't ready to command a city and she knows it. But that isn't to say that a certain somecreature else we’ve already met couldn't if and when the time comes.

If you think that's foreshadowing, so be it. I'm also planning on a funeral service followed by getting them settled in their new barracks with their griffon allies. Needless to say, they're going to be a little surprised by discovering the griffies actually use communal Roman-style bathhouses, though they’re thankfully *slightly* more sanitary than those of ancient Rome. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ancient_Roman_bathing

Given the reputation of Roman bathhouses, is that an opportunity for M-rated shenanigans? Possibly, but not right away, and definitely not the main emphasis for now. We've had our fun, and it'll be time to get back to business as they and the Cloven make plans.

Oh yes, and it's time to pick up one other loose end from earlier in the story. Don't think I've forgotten about the text Chris received from Starlight Glimmer, folks. I promise to address that soon. Possibly even next chapter if I find a good spot for it.

Comments ( 2 )

Magnificent news, looking forward to it ♡
Be it the main story progress ♤ or Eros ♡

But I wonder what Equestria is sending and if the Cloven are focused on Griffonia or other nations as well.
The C&C 3 Scrin Invasion comes to mind:

Attacking multible points for maximum chaos and keeping everyone in the defense as to prevent one side giving uncontested assistance.

Oh yeah, i'm looking forward to what Starlight Glimmers text ment.

The mixed bathing might be something the changlings pushed for from the shades, to have a place in every military installation, to get some love in a pinch.

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