Kind Request

Hello, dear writers. As you all may have noticed, I've recently published a small one-shot entitled Tea Addict just before my school started, at which point I will be busy with work. As such, I would like to request some help in editing the fic, dealing specifically with the imagery, language, and construction of the writing. All help is welcomed, big or small.

For general information, the fic is about 2900-ish words long, and concerns about batponies and tea drinking. I may have to make some changes to the ending when I'm free, but that's the overall idea.

If you're interested, just hit me with a message and I'll respond as quickly as possible!

Cheers, Isuvyw.

Comments

[Nebbie]

I assume this was dealt with already, as a note on the fic indicates some editing was done on the ending?
Also, from a quick glance, I advise considering the diuretic affects of tea as a discussion topic if an extra joke is wanted.

[Isuvyw]

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Hey there! It's more or less completed and edited, but a good and fresh pair of eyes would be marvelous, if only to the further refine the story. Let me know if you're up for it!