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CorruptedKindness


Doing nothing with my life and so far, things are okay

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  • 1 week
    Sorry for being AFK

    Hey everyone.

    I'm sorry for not posting or updating you guys in a while. Don't worry, I'm doing fine.

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  • 25 weeks
    Odyssey Update

    Hey everyone.

    It's been a bit since the last chapter so I wanted to give you all an update.

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    5 comments · 323 views
  • 36 weeks
    Progress Report

    Hey all!
    I figured perhaps being more consistent in updating you on story progress wouldn't be a bad idea.
    Work on the newer chapters is still ongoing (working on the next meanwhile chapter, which always takes longer than main story chapters), but this update's for something else.

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    0 comments · 155 views
  • 39 weeks
    I live... AGAIN!!!

    Yes, I'm back... sort of.

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    3 comments · 197 views
  • 53 weeks
    Bit of an update

    Hey guys, been a while.

    So, Let's talk Odyssey. Don't get scared, I'm not quitting. I've spent nearly two years writing it thus far, I'm not quitting now.

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    2 comments · 366 views
Aug
27th
2023

Progress Report · 4:46pm Aug 27th, 2023

Hey all!
I figured perhaps being more consistent in updating you on story progress wouldn't be a bad idea.
Work on the newer chapters is still ongoing (working on the next meanwhile chapter, which always takes longer than main story chapters), but this update's for something else.

I recently thought about the restored element bearers and realised Applejack had been reverted far more than the other three. Now, in story I might've made the argument this was because AJ never agreed with/liked Talvira, but the truth is I didn't think she should retain much of her monstrous self at the time. Now, having been at this story for over two years, I figured that should change so she's more in line with the others. So, I've gone back and touched up Applejack's appearance in chapter 8 to retain some of her corruptions, and shall do so with her other appearances in the story so far very soon. I also took that opportunity to touch up some minor mistakes in the chapter as well.

Finally, I've fleshed out the prologue a little bit. Only around five to six hundred words, but makes the prologue a bit thicker and more descriptive.
I intend to go over the other older chapters at some point, to smooth out mistakes and flesh out more elements of the story, so I'll let you know when that happens.

Despite this, my task is still the new chapters. But this will hopefully get me used to writing again after such a long absence. Fingers crossed.

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