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My second ever story is complete! · 8:15pm Aug 8th, 2023
My Little Spark: The Movie has joined Dawn of the Storm as my second, fully completed story on this website!
Now, it's time to shift my attention to my other projects, like the possible sequel to MLS:TM, the story that follows Real after the events of DOTS, or my Equestria Girls story that I have in the works.
I don’t know which one I’ll go for first, bit we’ll just have to see where things go and if you like what I’m writing.
I would love to hear from you guys about how you feel about what you read, as you know that constructive criticism can really help a person grow.
Thank you so much for sticking with me, and can't wait to see what come next! 
-Real AllBridge
Hello! I liked a lot of what you did with this story, it followed the events of the movie while still having enough original ideas and moments to make it feel like its own thing.
I can’t wait for a sequel in the future along with future projects you have in store, my biggest criticism with the story was the fact that Sonic and a few other characters didn’t do a whole lot.
With Sonic just sitting around doing nothing for most of it aside from a few moments, and characters like Fluttershy and Applejack feel non-existent.
But even with those issues I still had fun reading through it. Have a good day sir, you’ve earned it.
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Valid point, and I can see why. They didn’t really have much of a role in the movie either, and I had Sonic take a back seat so Tionic could shine here. When I write up a sequel, don’t worry about Fluttershy or Applejack being forgotten.
Now that I’m no longer restricted by the events that happen in the movie, I can get much more creative with the characters and how they develop with each other. Sonic will be doing a lot with Tio in the future, and the girls and Spike will be with him every step of the way. And if you’ve read DotS, then you know what’s in store for the Spark.
Also, thank you for your comment! This will help me create better stories as time goes on. I look forward to your future comments!
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You’re welcome.