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So you’ve written your magnum opus, it’s perfect, you release it into the world and… no-one reads it. Damn.
A lot of people ask me how they can make their stories more popular, so I thought I’d put some advice down here for posterity. This post isn’t about story writing. Of COURSE that is the most important thing in writing a good story, don’t think it isn’t. But once you’ve done the hard work in writing a brilliant tale, there’s a lot more you should do to attract readers and I see people making the same obvious mistakes again and again. Maybe your story is brilliant, but if people never click on it, they’ll never get to read it!
Title
What’s your story called? Maybe it’s a spinoff of a popular tale like Fallout Equestria or My Little Dashie. Don’t go calling it “Fallout Equestria: Fall Harder” or “My Little Thunderlane”. You instantly restrict your readership before you begin to just the people who have read the original. Your story should stand on its own two feet.
Your title should be unique and also relatable to your story. There are so many stories with extremely generic titles. You might want to call your Flutterdash ship fic “ON THE WINGS OF AN ANGEL” but that tells the reader absolutely nothing about the story (unless it is about Angel growing wings). Stuff that sounds nice but is generic should be off the board, you want a title that instantly conjures up your story to mind and trips off the tongue. This will also help in passing along word of mouth because people will be able to recall your story more quickly.
(If anyone wants to write ‘On The Wings Of An Angel’ about Angel getting jealous of a Flutterdash ship and growing wings, be my guest).
Also remember that no-one knows your OC. No-one cares about your OC. Don’t name your story after your OC unless it’s a clever title. There’s about five million stories with the title “The Adventures of Floaty McPegasus”. You might love your OC, but no-one else does, your story title may as well be “The Adventures of Blah Blah Blah” for all the impact it will have on the reader.
Description
This is ridiculously important. It's this which will convince people to click on your story in the first place. The quality of your writing makes them stay. The short description is what is used on the front page now, so make sure it grabs the reader. Advertise your story's unique selling point. Intrigue them.
There are a lot of stories with very vague descriptions. “A story about Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash”. Avoid this. There’s nothing unique about this – about 100 stories are submitted to fimfiction a day, you need to make sure your description shows the reader in a very concise manner the following:
WHAT your story is about
WHO is in your story
WHY it is unique and worth the reader’s time.
If you can't find a good way to quickly describe why your story is unique, odds are it's not and you're already in trouble.
Again, remember that no-one cares about your OC. A description along the lines “This story is about Marmite Showers my OC” will not interest anyone. Why would anyone then decide to read that? How about: “Marmite Showers accidently delivers a truckload of weapon-grade Marmite to Twilight Sparkle’s house. Can he save the day before all of Ponyville is poisoned by the toxic yet oddly delicious goo?” That’s more exciting, though some people hate rhetorical questions (they would be wrong. Your description needs to be short, you should use all the tools at your disposal).
Take a look at stories which have 1000+ views and see what their descriptions are like. Most of them will probably get right in there with the key unique selling point of the story to pull the readers in.
Don’t be self-deprecating
There is nothing worse than a story’s description or opening lines being a note from the author about how “This is my first fanfic and it’s probably rubbish” or “I know my story is awful don’t hate me too much”.
It’s not charming. It won’t make people treat you nicer. All it will do is completely reduce any expectation a reader has of a story. Telling your reader this story is likely to be awful will make them think it’s awful even if it isn’t. It puts people in the mindset that they’re about to read something bad. If you really, really have to mention that it is your first story, put that in the author’s notes at the end. Don’t tell us your story is terrible, let the reader make their own mind up!
Exciting opening
Your first chapter, indeed your first LINE is so important that it needs to grab the reader and not let them go. Most people will click onto the first chapter, and if you've not captured their attention, they'll drift on to the next story. The opening to your story needs to be exciting, it needs to be dynamic! Attention spans these days are really short; you need to make sure your story starts with a metaphorical bang that makes people want to keep reading.
This does NOT include starting chapter 1 with a long, ponderous author’s note, or some really dry prose or descriptions. If you’re writing about an OC, remember that no-one cares about your OC at first, the job of your story is to make the audience care about your OC, then you can delve into them a bit more. Knowing that Marmite Showers is black with a yellow mane does not make the opening of a story exciting. Knowing that Marmite Showers has just accidently delivered industrial grade poison Marmite to Twilight Sparkle’s house does.
Chapter length
Yes, I know it’s tempting to share your work as quickly as possible. Dash out a few hundred words and mash ‘publish’ and it’ll be in the public domain. Stop! Stop now!
There are lots of stories with really tiny chapters, of about 500-1000 words. Seeing a gigantic list of chapters in a story is really daunting. The story might not even be that long, but being faced with a mammoth list of chapters can flick a switch in your reader’s head and make them leg it. Play the long game; make sure your chapters are big and meaty. Aim for about 3-5k a chapter, each chapter starting and finishing in an exciting place and moving the story forward. That’ll help give your story momentum and keep your readership.
When to upload
Don't upload a gigantic story all in one go, that's also off-putting. You want to reduce the feeling of 'not reading that!' which people might have as a gut reaction. In the same vein, don't scrape the bare minimum and upload 1000 words. That won't be enough to enthral your readers and make them stick around. That’s the number one problem I see – people have an interesting idea, but publish the story the moment it hits 1000 words.
When your story is uploaded onto the site it hits the front page. That’s a massive boost, that’s your best advantage to getting readers. Your story needs to be in its best, most enticing form. Not barely formed and weakly limping across the site. When you hit publish, I recommend having about 5-10k of your story done, that's enough to leave people wanting more, but not scaring them away from your gigantic story. A story will get most of its hits on the first day because it appears on the front page, you want to use that to maximum advantage.
Image
Yes, this is shallow, but we live in a shallow world. Make sure you have an exciting image for your story. Pony Creator images are an instant turnoff. If you find yourself uploading a Pony Creator image, stop and throw your computer out of the window.
Your story picture has to be eye-catching. If you can’t draw, ask an artist if you can use their art. There’s a ‘source’ option on the image upload function to enable you to properly credit the artist and link back to their own site, so it can be a good deal for the artist as well to be attached to a popular story!
For most of you, the above may seem astonishingly obvious, but just check the front page for recently uploaded stories. Odds are that about half of them will make some obvious errors which will cause perhaps a good story from getting noticed.
Agree? Disagree? Got more advice? Leave comments below! Remember, again, this post isn't about writing an amazing story, it assumes you've already written something brilliant. Obviously that's the most important thing!
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Also boobs, show a little skin in your cover pic and you are good to go.
Source: Ex-Ponyfall Writer
You lie.
Everyone knows the secret to have someone read your story is to include the phrase: "Soft Drinks and Pie" in the description. Not... your common sense.
Many of these things I incorporated into my story. Listen to this guy everypony, he knows what he's talking about.
eeyup!
Well, I already do all this... it's just the time that it's uploaded that kills me. When I uploaded my story, I thought it would've taken a good 12 hours like before! Instead, it came one hour after submission at 12... in the night... when I wanted it when people WEREN'T sleeping.
You forgot to mention that if you really want your story to popular, you must have an original idea.
Unless it's Halo...
-Liam
...So what happens when you do all of the above and your story is still forgotten?
Really good advise.
Wish someone posted this sooner.
You mean that people don't want to read my story "The Inferno Within the Shadow of Darkness" about my black and red Alicorn-Zebra-Dragon-Minotaur who falls in love with Twilight Sparkle and saves the world from his mother, Celestia? Awww. But I had the Pony-Gen image ready and everything.
>>625292
Well you can't have NWS images, though yes, sadly sometimes a racy image can help even the most mundane fic. I wouldn't recommend that though!
Hmmmm, by this logic Green would have never gotten read. But then I suppose minimalism in a title is striking as well. And the image is very memorable.
The main problem with rhetorical questions is that on a site like this, where at least half your readers are fic writers themselves, you run the risk of having them come up with their own answers to your rhetorical questions and going off to write their own stuff, or at least preferring their hypothetical versions of your fic to your actual fic.
Good advice in general, though.
>>625314
Knighty has added some new admin from various timezones (including me!) so that there should always be someone online to approve fics!
They can get really annoying when you over do it, though. Something like "What if a new pony name Marmite Showers came to Ponyville? What would happen if he asked Twilight Sparkle on a date? What if she said yes? What if they got married and had five children? Read and find out!"
It's a big pet peeve of mine and I see it way too often; not as much in this fandom, but it should still be avoided.
>>625291
I think I'm supposed to take offense to this on principle. So... I'm offended?
>>625331
I would. Got me 300+ likes when normally I would of had 7.
>>625343 And now I know
Can't complain, though... still got a lot of views, even for 12 o'clock.
Bang on. Preach it brother! Every single element you list as a mistake has turned me off at one point or another. Excellent.
>>625336
Oh yes, I can think of a few fics off the top of my head that have attracted readers with a super minimalist approach. But also a lot more that got ignored.
Did practically everything you suggested with my two highest read stories. Results speak for themselves. Anyone who wants to attract a stable and size-able readership should take heed of this blog.
Title, Synopsis, Length, Opening, Art; all are extremely important and to overlook one is at your own peril!
Agree with all points.
I will keep them in mind before publishing my current story.
Question: is there a place to run short descriptions by? I know my long description is good but I am having trouble with the short version.
>>625345
Researcher: The average radio listener listens for eighteen minutes a day. The average Howard Stern fan listens for - are you ready for this? - an hour and twenty minutes.
Kenny: How could this be?
Researcher: Answer most commonly given: "I want to see what he'll say next."
Kenny: : All right, fine. But what about the people who hate Stern?
Researcher: Good point. The average Stern hater listens for two and a half hours a day.
Kenny: : But... if they hate him, why do they listen?
Researcher: Most common answer: "I want to see what he'll say next."
Actually you can start with Marmite Showers' mane (and by this I mean to prove your point, please don't hate me
)
This... makes sense, actually. Will make note.
>>625291 Fuck you
>>625359
I tend to run mine by friends. It's especially useful to run them by people who haven't read your story to see if they find it interesting or not. The problem I find is that as I know what my story is like, my mind tends to fill in the blanks when writing a description and I miss out obvious stuff.
Obviously the correct way is to use all those blackmail points you've been saving up to make highly followed writers advertise your story.
You should add the line at the very end, "Sadly, if you do all of this, you might not have a popular story." I've seen a lot of stories (and written two) that followed every single one of these things, and it doesn't work sometimes. Sometimes, it's down to just being lucky.
Oh, and this:
You missed the perfect moment to use the word "defenestrate". I am disappointed in you.
>>625370
Perhaps swearing at people is your special talent?
I agree with everything in this.
The only problem is that the authors who would most likely benefit from this the most probably aren't even aware of the existence of this post.
>>625367
I... I think I love you.
>>625360
I'm fairly certain I'm still supposed to be offended. Blargh.
>>625380
Well, at least I've written it down so I (or someone else) can point them this way!
>>625376
I am saving the word 'defenestrate' for a special occasion (no, seriously!)
A description that raises more questions than it answers is always good. Another way to hook people is the juxtaposition of a seemingly disjointed title and description.
For example, SS&E's Gift: "Then one day, a mysterious pony visits from out of town. She wishes to meet Rarity, but not to thank her." (It also helps that I knew Gift means poison in German.)
Example of juxtaposition: Clop It! by PrettyMonster: "This is not a clop fic."
Nooooooo! Your common sense is burning my ears!
>>625383 Lets elope and make writing babies!
>>625375 Flattery also works.
>>625394 It better be a damn good moment, and you better link me to it.
If it isn't worth it... son... I am disappoint.
>>625389
Oh well. I guess ironic trolling is not for me. I was simply pointing out how much attention can be garnered negatively, as opposed to positively. If it was overly offensive in your opinion, then I acknowledge that you were offended and will try to avoid offending you in the future.
I noticed another Story labeled "The Great Pony War" - perhaps that title indeed needs changing!
>>625411
But... I wanna be offended!
...Am I trying too hard? Yes? Thought so...
What a great idea for a blog post!
But seriously! This one is a lot better than my take on the same idea, and combines some ideas I've been pondering since, particularly the bit about needing a good first chapter that I've been trying to teach others.
I'll probably link back to this thing. And yeah, Pony Creator images are not a good idea; why? Because they LOOK lazy. They look like the author doesn't care, and if the author doesn't care, why should we?
Excellent Blog!
I especially agree with the "Don’t be self-deprecating" part; it is a negative double-whammy for me (as a reader).
As a potential reader I do not care if it is the first or the 573th piece of fiction you write - some authors have gained a following and reputation (good or ill) but the majority are blank sheets in the eyes of most readers, including you. No need to point that out.
Also, it does not matter to the story itself, so why would you make it part of the summary? At this point, no matter the answer you give, it will count against you:
A) You didn't know better - which casts your skills as an author in doubt.
B) You felt your story is really not good - which casts a negative light on your story.
C) You want to garner sympathy and deflect criticism - see A & B
So for Faust's sake DON'T!
If you honestly want to get feedback put a line in the Author's notes ("Feedback, good or bad, and criticism is always welcome") and/or get a pre-reader.
>>625367
Honestly, I'd read that story. Seriously.
This might be literally the most inconviniently timed piece of advice I have ever received
.
Well, I'll still take any advice I can get.
You should add that writing stories with a ridiculous concept is also generally a bad idea, like a ravenous vegetable critiquing the food and service at Sugarcube Corner and if they don't do a good job then they'll go out of business. That was my mistake. Nobody said it was bad... out of the eight people who actually read it, that is. They actually seemed to like it. But, let that be a lesson. Don't write stories about sentient, hungry vegetables.
I wouldn't exactly call it shallow. I expect the picture of a story to be related to the story in some way and therefor help the description along with giving me an idea what the story is about. Just because it's not written text doesn't make it any less valid.
... of course, if the picture is generic or has nothing at all to do with the story, that's not helping. ESPECIALLY if it promises something the story isn't
>>625343.
grats to that.
>>625426
You... realise who you're talking to, right?
I can attest that this advice given here works, and I am still learning to apply it all to my writing.
One thing I would suggest is that if your story fits within a popular group, then join and add your story to it. I have found that it increased the number of views for those that have gone into their groups.
There are times when a lack of details in a title can be a good thing. Example.
>>625429
Well, I meant 'shallow' in that in many cases, people will judge a story by the quality of the image (it's just human nature) whereas mostly, the writer will not have had anything to do with the image.
Hi,
I'm not sure that the business about chapter length is really true - although the effect cited is definitely real, it's worth noting that every time a new chapter is published the story gets another pass through the 'updated stories' list, which allows it to attract readers. If it is fortunate enough to have sufficient regular readers to bump it into the featured box, then more chapter updates means more time there too. If it's lucky enough to be on EqD, then the same applies.
Also, it presumably isn't a choice between two thousand word updates each week or eight thousand word updates each week, but rather eight thousand word updates each month. How longer chapters and longer intervals between chapters interact (in terms of how they change the story's popularity) need not be straightforward.
Perhaps a solution is to 'bundle' short chapters into longer 'sequences' - as has been done in 'Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality' - or perhaps to publish short chapters which are later collapsed into longer ones. This might violate some rule, however (or if it does not, perhaps it should).
Yours,
JoE
A few observations on what helps, or at least what helped me.
- GROUPS. Spam them. No, seriously. There are what, ten different shipping groups? Plus groups for specific ponies, story size, story type, ship type, etc. Example: If you write a 1500-word RariDash shipfic, then submit to groups called Rarity, Rainbow Dash, F/F Shipping, Common Shipping, Organized Shipping, RariDash, Fillyfoolers, Short Fics, and whatever else looks appropriate. Don't submit to inappropriate groups; just because Dash shouts "Holy Sweet Luna!" does not mean your story belongs in the Luna is Best Pony group.
- PROOFREAD. This goes double for the short and long descriptions, the story title, and the chapter titles. If I see a story with typos in the description, forget it. Even before editing, proofread! Then edit. Then proof it again. Preferably, someone other than the author should proofread.
- ANNOUNCE IT. You have a blog page, use it. You may not have many followers, but every little bit counts, and word of mouth helps. If you have other authors edit and proof your story, ask them if they'll post a note on their own blog announcing that your story's been posted: "Hey all, I just edited a great little RariDash fic called 'Fancy Wings' for new author DooooontHateMe, you should check it out." If they're nice enough to edit for you, chances are they'll be nice enough to shill for you too.
- TAGS. Get them right and make them to the point. They're not like Skittles - you don't have to have one of each color. If your story is about Rarity and Dash confessing their love after some hilarious misunderstandings, great. Tag [Romance][Comedy] + [Rarity][Dash]. Be warned that OC and Other character tags can be a turnoff to some readers; be honest about who's important in your story.
About images - agreed, you definitely need one. Original art is nice, and most artists are glad for the exposure and will happily give their OK. Browse DevianArt for sources. If you don't want to go that route, look for screencaps from the show itself which capture your story's mood. All my stories have screencaps for cover art; usually cropped down to the important parts. Unless your story involves an OC, then there's a good chance your topic has been seen somewhere on the show at least once. Head to the MLP Wiki and look through the Gallery pages for relevant episodes.
>>625426
Some of the better one-shots are pretty random idea's.
Though i have not seen anything with vegtables yet, i'm sooo going to read your story.
Mt.Blueshift, today I was writing a guide to writing pony fiction. Would you mind if I paraphrase or even copy this? I was honestly writing the exact same thing when this popped up...
All credit to you, of course.
>>625455 Blueshift wrote quite a hilarious one-shot about peas. If you're interested in veggie-pony fics I highly recommend it.
I feel like my one weakness in my story that i could have addressed was the title. Commanders isn't exactly the greatest title. My one other option was Steel the Night, creative BUT I just didn't use it.
Quality vs Quantity: It is important to have somebody else look over your shoulder at some point during the creative process, and when it’s all done to catch both the conceptual errors as well as the grammar failures. You won’t get looked at if you never publish anything, and you won’t get looked at if you publish crap. Trade off pre-reading/grammar with another writer about your skill level and *both* of you will improve measurably.
This is the Story that goes on and on… . There’s an Engineering Murphy’s law that comes into effect here. “In any project, there comes a time to shoot the engineer and put the dammed thing into production” Pick nice logical breaks to split your chapters, and pop one up every couple of days after the first chapter is approved and shows. Put them up at around the same time of day and pace it so the last chapter goes up with about the same interval. And for Celestia’s sake, either have your story finished and ready to go before you publish that first chapter or at LEAST a couple chapters in the hopper and ready to go and an ending in mind. One thing that just sticks in my gizzard is writers who publish their first chapter… then nothing for months or never.
If you’re writing, join a couple of the writing groups and read their threads and helpful guides. They were written for a purpose, and that is YOU. (well, me too).
My history: I wrote ‘Two Unicorns walk into a village’ as my first fic here. Broke *all* the above rules, and it *stunk*. Since then, I’ve re-edited it about ten times in part or top to bottom, and it has finally gotten up to ‘I’m not embarrassed about it’, which is pretty good for me. Since then I’ve cranked out light humor, angst, economics, romance and history of the Night Pegasi, and in my opinion, gotten better with each one. It’s very important to *learn* from your mistakes or instead of becoming old and wise, you just become old.
>>625449
I did consider that, yes. It's six of one, half a dozen of the other. I'm talking more about the chapters which are 500-1000 words. Sure you'll get a bump every time you update, but it's diminishing returns. Readers are fickle and unless each new chapter grabs them, they won't stick about, and new readers will be met with a gigantic wall of chapters.
I do agree with the pony creator image thing, but there's a problem with fixing that. Using myself as an example, I can't draw, to my knowledge nobody who has read my story has made fan art, and I don't have any money to pay an artist for cover art. So the pony creator is kinda the only option other than no art at all.
>>625457
Go for it!
I would recommend that if you catch yourself using a Pony Creator Image, that you change the image instead of throwing your computer out the window, as computers can be fairly expensive.
Sure all these methods are fine and dandy. But, you could take the easy method. Just write a short story about something stupid and throw in some cheesy humor. You'll get the popular vote, somehow.
>>625460
That was the one with Twlight and Shining Armor as two peas in a pod right?
I think it was.
Yeah. I got something to add. Be lucky and hope that it doesn't get buried under the influx of new stories when it's that time of the day.
>>625455 You have no idea how happy I am to hear that. It's not totally completed yet (the next and last chapter won't take much longer), but I sincerely hope you like what I have so far. And if not, I would be very appreciative to hear what you think I can do to improve, or even just what you thought. Any opinion, whether good or bad, is very valuable to me.
Now I feel kinda bad. I didn't mean to advertise my fic on an unrelated blog, seems kinda rude.
>>625432 I noticed your latest story about the lemon and all I can say is touche. Though now I must wonder what exactly I did wrong.
Oh, and I have no idea how I never knew that you were the one who wrote "The Star in Yellow," among a few other of my favorite fics! I can't believe I wasn't watching you sooner... time to correct that.
>>625511 Yeah, lol.
>>625508
Haha. That's kinda why I've stopped writing stuff like that. I'm sure that if i churned out a one-shot 'wacky' comedy twice a week I could easily eclipse the reads my more 'serious' stories get. But where's the challenge in that?
>>625504
This is true, also you might accidently hit someone with it.
Clearly it's not. Look at the rubbish that populates the feature box (wait, it's not a box anymore
) nearly constantly: clop and silly Pony verbs a noun stories and more clop. I agree, occasionally there are hidden gems sparkling through the pile of horse crap that gets featured, but getting attention (your pointers are an excellent hint how to do that, by the way! 
) seems to be all that matters nowadays. 
>>625519 Exactly. When I wrote Without a Rhyme, I was literally trying for the featured box, and I got it. Since then I haven't written for the featured box. Sure, I've wanted it very badly, but there's no fun in getting featured with a story you wrote to cheat.
>>625493
I think there's always another option. Maybe some sort of generic picture that captures the 'spirit' of the story. Perhaps something with other characters in the story. Something abstract, even. Personally, I think a Ponycreator image is more of a turnoff than no image (that's just my point of view though!)
I saw Wanderer D put this in his blog about how you teach people how to get people to actually read stories. I'll be completely honest. I said, "Wait, Blueshift? Oh man, I can't wait to read this trollblog!"
Man.
>>625531
And I bet you anything all the praise you had for that story was completely hollow. I know that feeling!
Yeah, you can put something really cynical and pandering up in order to grab the feature box, but if it's a story you don't care about, it's a pretty meaningless victory.
>>625517
That one sure was done a while ago.
Damn i'm getting nostalgic, do we bronies exist long enough to be legaly nostalgic?
All i have to do now is grow a beard, go smell like old people (somehow) and ramble to the new bronies while slamming with a stick on the frontporch wich i am sitting on.
>>625535
Same, it just seems more and more "run of the mill" with that.
>>625540 Well, I only have 300 followers, so i still have to try for the featured box
>>625535 Yeah, I don't think that'll work for me, since I'm not sure how I'd describe that "sprit" of something, and if it's something that involves other character in the story... yeah that wouldn't work if they're not the main focus. Using my story as an example again, the most important canon character is Rainbow Dash, yet she's not the one that is focused on, and she's not in every chapter. She's in most of them, but not all.
Don't get me wrong I do think using the pony creator is kinda lazy, but it's the best option when you have nothing. Yet, if someone did make fan art of my story then I'd definitely replace the pony creator art I have now. Or if there's any artist that'll work for free, but I'd doubt it. Hell, my own sister said she's charge me $30 for a colored image.
>>625443
Ah yes, suppose that makes sense.
>>625535
Yeah, pony creator images scream "THIS IS ABOUT MY OC ISN'T HE AWESOME AN AMAZING!". I don't care if your story is the best in the world- I've clicked on maybe 5 pony creator imaged fics, and only one WASN'T a gary stu/ mary sue cheese fest. And even that one wasn't particularly good. No image tells me "He couldn't find an image". Pony creator tells me "He really likes that character, and is probably going to spend a lot of time talking about them."
The only comparably bad image is one of the famous ones everyone's already seen a thousand times- you want to stand out, not blend in, and if there's more than three fics using one particular image, then people will mistake one for the other and won't care for any of them overly much.
>>625293 You forgot the most important part of that: FREE Soft drinks and pie. And cake, but make sure you can deliver on your promises, otherwise people will get cranky.
biggest rule you didn't put in? DO NOT BE RHETORICAL IN YOUR DESCRIPTION. Second biggest is DO NOT ASK QUESTIONS IN YOUR DESCRIPTION. It's cheap and boring and your readers will give you the middle finger and go elsewhere.
>>625503
Excellant good sir.
Mayhaps you could read the blog post I'll be putting up in... a few minutes? It'll give you a good idea of the initiative.
>>625544 It's the internet. We can be nostalgic about things that happened only five minutes ago.
...If your reading this its either because I'm either reading this to you now and your ears are soaking up every word, or I've been killed by the creatures that live in this land and you've managed to translate this journal, either way I hope you become entertained or intrigued by the events which occur in this story or journal, to you this may just be a story written by a very imaginative...whatever creature is sentient here and may just believe this is a fluke, but I assure you listener, or reader, that everything I have written down is true, all experiences, times good, times bad, romance (Unlikely), hate, tragedy, all true, even as I'm writing these words down now, I know I will experience these in this land, I don’t know, whether it be precognition or magic, I know. My name is William. Graham. Barnett. And this, is my story...
>>625587
Does Blueshift hate rhetorical questions? Or does he secretly love them? Does he have a plushie of a rhetorical question which he goes to bed with every night?
When I read this, I felt so shallow because I realise I do all of this. AND judge a story by a picture...
Now I feel horrible
Still good tips!
>>625597
Yeah but now it actually feels right to do, i mean come on, how long ago started season 2? About a year ago.
Right? i don't trust my memory a lot and i'm to lazy to look it up.
>>625602
...urge to kill... rising...
>>625602
What an intelligent, sophisticated and intresting question on wich i sadly do not have an awnser.
>>625516
Yeah so i'l just keep this short, saw it, left a response.
>>625602
...
I want to see that plushie.
>Description
Too bad Knighty decided that all places your story appears (unless featured) will use the short description. Good luck having an interesting description in a twitter-sized post.
>>625763
It forces people to be more concise, at least. Half the descriptions on the site are long, rambling things talking about everything BUT what the story's about.
I didn't know any of that when I started writing, it was also my first fic and it had a lot of mistakes. My luck was that the idea in the first two chapters was pretty good, the cover attracted a lot readers and it went very well with the title. If I had named it any other way and didn't had that cover, I would have not gathered that many readers.
Indeed, not a lot of people care about author notes... but if you have some, place them in the first comment (I will not use the new author comments feature because it invades the pure space of the story, which I kept clear of any comments, ANs or stuff like that)
>>625774
Yeah, but the short description is too short. And there's absolutely no reason to use the short description on a user's homepage. It's like he's trying to make sure that new fics get ignored.
>>625331 Hey, For LA in school I needed to do a story *the district made it one page when i was planning over 10* and all I need is somebody to preread it. I could do it myself but I know that I would give it a thumbs up. My parents could but they are still really edgy about me liking MLP and my sis is to little to give a proper overview. I was wondering if you could help me.
EDIT: BTW. thanks for the advice concerning chapter length. I need to work on that and update time.