Chapter 20 · 4:45am Mar 3rd, 2023
So I think this chapter really shows the differences between Luna and Celestia and how Luna feels ashamed about some of the stuff she feels she's forced to do. While it could be argued that her methods were drastic, they did accomplish the objective. And the fact that Luna refuses to tell Celestia what she did shows she too does not want her sister to know what she's capable of.
Celestia on the other hand wouldn't have done something so...barbaric, at least not in my eyes. I think she'd rather lose than taint herself with something so unsavory. Celestia is a saint. Luna is a fighter.
I also had fun fleshing out the Rainbow guard a bit more.
I actually toyed with the idea of killing off Cadance, Celestia, or the both of them in this chapter, but I scrapped that idea rather quickly as it felt anticlimactic and very forced though it would have been a twist I don't think many would've seen coming. (Probably cause it doesn't make sense to be honest.)
From here on its non stop so I hope you all like it. I've gotta say I'm really pleased with the way the story turned out. I'd say if you have qualms as of now give it time, I really do think the ending is worth it. (I'm not biased lol)
Until next time everyone.
