Fluttershy hammered in the last nail, sighing in relief. Placing it back into her (borrowed) toolbox, she took a step back, admiring her work.
The chicken coop looked just like new. She was even able to add a few more things to it, thanks to Applebloom's advice. It now had a small pool, an A/C, and even a licorice dispenser. She didn't know why AJ's sister recommended it, but it made her animal friends happy.
As she turned to go inside her own home, she had to stop, almost running into two other mares. She blinked, and then beamed happily at her friend. "Hello, Vinyl." She turned to the other mare, her happy expression degrading into a confused one. "...and...Screwball..."
The magenta pony smiled brightly at her, though it seemed a little forced. She had on a purple apron, with tools and other objects stuffed into the pockets far beyond full. "So, what would you like me to do?" She lifted up a hoof in salute, a hammer and a chisel falling out of her apron.
Fluttershy stared at Screwball, confusion written all over her face. "...what do you mean?"
She laughed a bit, wrapping a leg around Vinyl. "She's good, isn't she? I could swear she didn't know, that's how great an actress she is!"
The white unicorn mover her hoof out from under a falling pair of scissors and stared at the airborne earth pony, a bemused look on her face. "'Shy's really not that great at acting. She's telling the truth."
Screwball's eyes grew as wide as saucers. "Really!?"
Vinyl coughed, bringing up her phone with her magic and bringing it over to Fluttershy. "You won, 'Shy! By a large margin, too!"
Fluttershy stared blankly at the screen. "...I...I won?" She smiled, flying into the air with a flap of her wings. "I can't believe it! I feel like shouting! Woohoo!~" Her voice was soft for the cheer, but that was to be expected when it came to the pale yellow pegasus.
"Yeah, 'Shy." Vinyl grinned, putting the device away and gesturing at Screwball. "So, what do you want her to do? Fix the damage she caused?" She then noticed the coop, and shut her mouth tight, embarrassed.
Fluttershy looked at the earth pony, then her chicken coop, then back at the mare. "...um...I already fixed it...but..." She put a hoof to her chin, thinking a bit. An idea soon came to her. "...oh! Maybe you could...I don't know...choose a different route? So you wouldn't run into it again?" She squeaked, hiding behind her mane again. "...i-if you wouldn't mind, I mean..."
Screwball sagged a bit, her head drooping in her melancholy. "I suppose. I thought you'd have more than that, though..." She kicked a rock, which went sailing up into a tree.
Vinyl coughed softly, drawing their attention. "You know, 'Shy still has two other 'requests' that she can use." She pointed a hoof at them, her eyes narrowing in a semi-angry glare. "Just no more intimate stuff. We have enough of that, due to those two young ones." She turned and walked away, speaking under her breath. "...thanks a lot for that, by the way, E..." She could hear the ponies chatting behind her, but wasn't really paying attention, her mind elsewhere.
"...where are you, Octy?"
The grey mare in question continued her journey through the forest, looking around carefully. She had snacked on some zap apples, but that didn't really help fill her belly.
A bright light off to her right pulled her attention to it. She walked closer, seeing a blue mare with a two-toned blue mane. She seemed to be crying into a piece of purple, star-patterned cloth. As she approached, a twig broke under her hoof.
Almost immediately, a pair of dark violet eyes turned to her, glaring angrily yet still filled with tears. "What do you want?"
She put on her best diplomatic smile, extending her hoof genially. "My name is Octavia. What's yours?"
The unicorn knocked her hoof away, glaring at the tear stained cloth in her hooves. "I don't need to tell you that. Leave me be." She gestured to a nearby newspaper, her words turning acidic. "You'll just laugh at me, anyways, thanks to that stupid Gabby Gums!"
Octavia grabbed the paper, skimming over the column. "...'secret revealed'?"
Okay, a few things I'd like to say!
One, and possibly an important one, comment #2100 gets to choose who gets to have a rematch! The only ones I have to say no to are 'Lyra vs. Ditzy' and 'The Flim Flam Bros. vs. The Spa Sisters'. The first one is because Lyra was chosen to be the first to have a second battle. The second one is because I still refuse to do a battle without a title card for the character, and the FFBs still don't have theirs.
Two, TWILIGHTCLOPPLE LIKES MY RAP BATTLES!! >u< Sorry for fan-fillying like that, but I had to get that out.
Three, though the next battle is ready, the story for it is not, so please be patient with me. I'm also waiting for a certain something so I can make a certain part of the rap more understandable, since it alludes to something slightly obscure and might not make sense if just read out loud.
Four, I HAS A TUMBLR!! Sadly, I had already used my username on here over there, so I had to make a new one. ^^; The new tumblr is creativeequestrian.tumblr.com. Not really a serious blog, but it's mine. Also, you can ask the rappers questions on there, after their battles!
And that's about it. Have a nice day!
Enigma out.~
I knew she would win.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy_umad.png Also I'll be sure to check out your Tumbler, and congrats!!!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_Scratch.png
I want to see someone against the Doctor. Don't care who, as long as the Doc's involved.
So that Trixie battle may be happening. Yes!
TRIXIE!
Yay.
Trixie is amazing, in my opinion. WOAH! I just realized that in my opinion is imo! I was wondering what that meant!
I am so tired. I shouldn't be tired, it's only 6 in the evening. Ah well. I won't sleep until my usual sleeping time! Four in the morning!
TRIXIE! YESSSSSSSSSSS!
sorry to disappoint, but another battle is happening right before the one with the aforementioned mare.
Spartan Shield
vs
Big Macintosh
Woo!!
Doctor Whooves vs. Zecora
Fuck Trixie! I want to see Cadence & Blueblood!
2100 you say?
And so it begins.
The generation of Chaos-helped raps.
LET'S GET IT STARTED IN HERE!!
Yo don't hate bro, Trixie is my favorite villian of MLP: Fim, and very badass....I'm happy for you Eni, it's also great to meet a author you admire you know? Hoping to see more of this of course and can't wait for next battle, also, what happened to the Spike/Bloombeg fic? You still writing that?
2100 ?
you are about to get so much random comments from people
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...the what fic? i'm afraid i have no idea what you're talking about.
Carrot Top V.S. Rose
943549 We talked about doing a Spike/Bloomberg fic....you don't remember?
I cant wait till the next Rap Battle :/
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...not really, no... and if we did, i never agreed to it...unless you're talking about spikeXsweetie...because that's my #1 ship.
943571 Let's do it! SpikeBelle is my second favorite pair of all time......we need ideas....give me a few seconds, I got your back 100% if you do make one.
And that's just odd...I swear I talked to someone about that...hmm....
I'm sure scootachicken will be thankful
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this was actually written before that last one was made. and, honestly, i've been trying to avoid listening to that. i wanted to avoid any chances of 'similarities'. though i think you got most of the rest.
Even though Screw did better, I knew Fluttershy would win. Why? Because everyone loves Fluttershy to the point of ignoring everything else
#10 is gonna be good
Spike vs. Blueblood
943551:
Or something witn Rose iin general.
XD
943625
Hey either you're confusing sweet emotion with Don't wanna miss a thing', or you missed the second song and i missed the first somewhere.
what happened to the crying angles
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that's called foreshadowing, my good sir. sadly, they don't come into play until a while later. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
Cadence vs Crystallise
943654 I got it!` No wait, I'll pm it to you so no one else on here can steal the idea....give me a second....
My earlier suggestion of Princess Cadance vs. Prince Blueblood still stands! After Trixie of course.
Comment #2100? I can totally wait...
Rose vs. Doctor Whooves.
Doctor Whooves
Vs.
Zecora
hmm...
Aj vs Rd?
sorry cant think of many good match ups... at the moment.
hmm..
Pinkie Vs pinkamina?
Opalescence VS winona?
oh oh! Tank vs gummy!
What comment number is this one?
oh snap, are we gonna have Diamond Tiara vs. Trixie? I am curious now. God Dangit!!! now I have to wait. that sucks.
possibly the doctor vs trixie
Doctor v trixie!
Hey, what about Blueblood vs Shining Armor? It would make kind of sense
Oh, and another one of my favourite musicians confirmed liking My little pony: Aurelio Voltaire Hernandez
946157
i heard seth green likes mlp.
946172 Cool.
So, now we have the following Celebrity-bronies:
-Notch
-Deadmau5
-Gaben Newell
-Voltaire
-Seth Green
-NicePeter (probably)
Who have I forgotten?
Applebloom made sure Scootaloo would be comfortable in there.
It's amazing how Octavia actually gave this story a plot.
I STILL NOMINATE ZECORA
I get the feeling that everyone just waits for the 2099th comment to be posted so they can be the 2100th, instead of posting comments to get near.
enigma, face it: there won't be a 2100th comment until the next battle.
Discord against Princesses Celestia and Luna - THE REMATCH!
Spitfire and Trixie...... Hah!
I win, unless that's cheating, in which case you shouold pick a new number...
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yeah, i consider that cheating. it's called a comment spam. sorry, but i have to delete those comments.
besides, i said that comment #2100 could choose the first rematch. lyra's just the first pony to get a second rap battle.
I knew Fluttershy would most likely win.
I wonder what the other 2 things Screwball will have to do for FS.
I have no idea what Shy is gonna do, but it might be saucy...