This is my first story and i would like some constructive critisism yes this is a scootaloo X spike thanks so much for your support everyone and feel free to comment whenever
Scootaloo was walking around Ponyville one afternoon, she saw the birds flying with the yellow pegasus Fluttershy. She thought to her self "what a nice morning",
As she continued on she bumped into Twilight "oh hi Scootaloo nice day isnt it" twilight said. "yessiree" repiled Scootaloo. As twilight walked away scootaloo realised twi was walking with her marefriend Trixie scootaloo thought "hmm i wonder how theyve been doing, oh well ONWARD" as she trotted away.
Taking notice to all the ponys with their marefriends or coltfriends she began to feel weird inside like something was missing. She continued to trot only this time she went slower heading home to the cmc treehouse to be alone again for the night.
On they way she saw Spike as he called "SCOOTS hey SCOOTS" from across the street he came toward her "hi Spike" she replied enthusiastically "whats wrong Scoots" he asked worridly "well ive been kinda lonly in the cmc treehouse every night and.." "wait" interupted Spike " you live in the treehouse what about your parentts.... Oops" as the dragon shoved his claws to his mouth.
" Its ok spike i try to remember them best i can but its hard and..." a tear droped from her face " its ok" said Spike i never knew my parents either" as he embraced her warm orange fur and couldent help but notice that her purple mane smelt of strawberries "sniff sniff really Spike" she tearly said "ya i've known only Twi since i was born, HEY i got an idea how about you come be a guest at the library with us"! "REALLY Spike that would be great " as she shot from his grip. They walked to the library together and for once scoots didnt feel alone
Ok dont worry this is not the end and this is my first fic but i hope you enjoy and hopefully theyll start gettin more intimate who knows stay tuned for more
Spike and Scootaloo were walking down the road toward the library but Spike could not stop thinking about how wonderful Scootaloo smelt he found himself thinking she smelt better than rarity.
Spike walked into the library and called "Twilight I brought a friend for a sleepover is that okay" "I don't know Spike we are really busy this week" "please Twilight please, please, please" begged Spike "fine who is it " "yay thanks Twi and it's Scootaloo c'mon let's go upstairs Scoots" said spike excitedly
"thank you Twilight" replied Scootaloo " it's my pleasure as long as you guys took it up with her paren...." "shhhh Twi" as Spike motioned her to the kitchen.
"what's wrong Spike" asked Twilight "well she doesnt have parents she an orphan" "WHAT she must be cared for at once" she proclaimed as she galloped into the living room.
After hours of games it's was time for bed and Scoots saw Spike pass out quickly and was sad cause she wanted to talk. Scootaloo could feel the heat coming from the baby dragon she tiptoed over and cuddled with him in his basket, she soon fell asleep.
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Spike woke up to Scootaloo in his lap, blushing profoundly he thought It would be best just to let her sleep.
After 20 minutes of laying there blissfully stroking her mane she slowly awoke with a big yawn "uhhhhhhh oh umm hi Spike" she said blushing "hello sleepyhead head c'mon get up I'll make breakfast" spike said getting up "yaaay thanks Spike" Scootaloo cheered she kissed him on the cheek.
Spike froze at that moment did that just happen he thought, Scootaloo just realized what she just did and forgot about Spikes feelings for Rarity she was angry with herself, crying she ran outside to the only place she could think of... The CMC headquarters.
Spike was left there thunderstruck "Spike I saw everything" said Twilight, Spike almost jumped 12 feet in the air she scared him so bad "Twi what just happend " asked Spike still frozen from fright "well I'd say you got kissed by a girl who liked you silly... But why did she run away, you should got talk to her".
All Spike could think about was Scootaloo he felt weird, "well I guess she could be at the treehouse" he muttered to himself as he ran to the farm he met Gummy, Pinkie pies pet toothless aligator, Spike could'nt help but pick him up, he was so cute he asked Gummy if he could help Cheer up Scoots gummy agreed (really he just croaked and Spike took it as a yes)
Spike made it to the treehouse and all he could here was crying and tearing words "stupid me stupid me oh Scootaloo why do you have to be stupid you know he's got feeling for Rarity but you kissed him and even snuggled with him, god KISSED him I can't believe me " spike listened and felt bad for her, its not like he didn't like those things.
Spike walked up the ladder with Gummy on his head Scootaloo saw him and started speaking " im so sorry Spike I'll stay here and leave you alone and I'll not bothe......" she was stopped by Spike kissing her on the lips she was startled she returned the favour. As the broke the kiss they heard a "CROAAK" from gummy they giggled and Scootaloo said "oh you want one to Gummy" and kissed him on the cheek.
They sat there for hours comforting eachother and spike found himself wanting this to be permenant and asked "Scoots instead of sleeping over at the library... Will you live with me there" Scootaloo was shocked and then she let out a huge grin "id love to Spike"
On the way back to the library they returned Gummy and said hello to Pinkie. On they way back Spike was the happiest he's been in weeks.
Well i hope that was better than the last. 2 chaps and dont worry this is just the beginning im aiming for at least 20 chaps hopefully work dont get in the way
As Spike and Scootaloo walked to the library all Spike thought about was the kiss with Scootaloo in the treehouse, he blushed at this.
When they walked in to the library they saw Twilight pacing in the livingroom, Twilight was thinking to herself "where are they, are they okay should i get help" but when she saw them walk in she was relieved asking "what happened, are you okay, why did Scootaloo leave?" spike replied with "come we will tell you over lunch".
During lunch Spike told Twilight about what happened between him and scootaloo leaving out the part about the kiss, Scootaloo was thankfull for that.
Spike spoke about Scootaloo being a permenant resident at the library, Twilight gave it some thought and said yes. Spike cheered and Scootaloo perked up buzzing her wings trying to fly, Spike smiled at her atempt as she floated inches off of the ground and then fell on her flank, they all giggled.
"Can Scoots and i go play" asked spike "sure" replied Twilight "but make sure your back before 6 and bring Scootaloo's stuff" she added "OKAY BYE TWI" Spike yelled as they ran out the door already across the street, Twilight giggled to herself and said "now to fixup the guest room for Scootaloo".
Spike asked Scootaloo what she wanted to do today "uummm we could go on a date" joked Scootaloo "sure if you want" Spike replied knowing full well she was joking. Scootaloo was shocked and said "REALLY SPIKE..... i didnt think you'd say yes" Spike laughed and said "well i really do care for you Scoots" she blushed and so did he. they walked on toward a resturant giggling and talking to each other
well another chapter has been finished thanks for your support friends from school and home. hope all yall enjoy.
Oh and on another note my pony i made on deviant was supposed to be me and i will insert a picture next chapter because he will be guest starring in the next chapter his name is 8-bit has hair like scratch only white with light blue streaks, long white tail with light blue streaks, and a light black coat.
This BONUS chapter goes out to CYTOTOXIN for showing how much i bucked up (thx bro im not joking ). so here goes i guess.
FIRST part = why is Trixie with Twilight
On the day when Twilight showed Trixie up by calming an ursa minor (yea yea she DID show her up, but humbley) Trixie left Ponyville feeling disgraced. While the mane six were celebrating the defeat of the beast.
Trixie was thinking how brave the lavender pony was, she stoped herself saying "wait why am i thinking about HER, i mean why is the great and powerfull TRIXIE thinking about that talentless pony" she drooped her head "what am i saying she IS amazing not me" she thought to herself and said the title of great and powerfull didnt work for her anymore as she walked past the outskirts of town.
Trixe made it to Manehattan after stoping in some other cities, she rented a hotel and decided she will look for work. After a month of living in Manehattan and working as a secretary for some big shot she thought life was boring and found herself thinking about the lavender pony Twilight Sparkle, she often thought about how much fun it must be to live in Ponyville.
One night Trixie was dreaming about Twilight and them embracing each other, she was enjoying it but as theyre lips where about to touch an ursa major claws grabed Trixie and threw her into a dark oblivion causing her to wake. The next few days she had the same dream, she was very lonely in Manehattan and she tried and tried to get the lavender pony out of her mind but she just couldent.
After two months in Manehattan she was finished with it and decided she's leaving for Ponyville to confess her feelings. When Trixie looked over a hill she saw Ponyville, she sighed and spoke "it looks so beautifull" as she trotted she thought about what Twilight would say but she didnt care she just wanted to get it off her head.
as she made it into town she saw everypony giving her dirty looks, she just hung her head low and trotted to the library hoping Twilight would be there. Knocking on the door she thought of what she would say then she head a voice "be there in a seconed" just hearing Twilights voice caused Trixie to get warm, just then the door opened at a shocked Twilight stared at Trixie.
"What do you want Trixie, let me guess while you where gone you defeated an ursa major..hmmm" Twilight said anoyed "umm...no i just ..uhh wanted to let you know im thinking of moving into Ponyville, and im VERY sorry and i undertstand if you still hate me but i thought i should tell you first".
Twilight was shocked she didnt think Trixie was capable of saying that "wow Trixie, i dont know what to say but thanks for apologizing" "well i dont expect you to forgive me right away so i will be in the Mareshoof hotel untill i get a job to pay for a house...goodbye" said Trixie "goodbye Trixie" replied Twilight.
As Trixie walked away Twilight glanced at her gleaming light blue coat, she then shook her head closing the door, "why did you do that Twilight. The next moring Trixie found a job as a maid in her hotel for 10 bits an hour, she was mighty satisfied with the amount. Twilight awoke to a dream about Trixie smiling "what was that about... oh well lets hope that doesnt continue" she walked downstairs seeing spike sleeping she thought he looked so cute.
A few months went by and Trixie had bought a house and was making friends with the other ponys, she thought to herself 'wow this is the life' but everynight she still drempt of Twilight hoping she could get the courage to tell her, she thought and thought and then said "TODAY i tell her" as she marched to the library.
Trixie knocked on the door Twilight opened it and said "hi Trixie come in i have tea ready, and spikes at fluttershys helping with her bunny's" "okay" replied Trixie as they sat down Trixie took in a bunch of air "Trixie are you okay you seem nervous" Trixe then spoke quickly "well when i went to manehattan i couldent stop dreaming about you and i think im in love and when you defated the minor i was in shock and...and.." she stumbled as she tried to get in air she stared at Twilight bent over and kissed Trixie.
Trixie was so suprised she said "wha..wha what just happend" Twilight blushed and spoke up "well when you came i guess ive been having dreams about you but i didnt think you liked me so i didnt say anything" they both blushed.
And thats how it started ........sooooo i hope yall enjoyed it as much as i enjoy writing so have a good one oh and btw this is bonus 1 of 3
1 = trixe and twilight 2 = scootaloos past 3 = the arrangments between scoots, spike, trixie and twilight.
Scootaloo and spike were walking down the busy streets of ponyville, the annual running of the leaves was coming up soon. ``so what should we do today scoots`` inquired spike ``um we could go to the video game store`` replied scootaloo ``great idea`` spike exclaimed.
The two made it to the store and on the top was a huge sign that said 8-bits v-games, spike opened the door for scootaloo and bowed, this made scootaloo giggle.``hey the dragon dude`s got style haha`` called a voice from the back room. ``im guessing your 8-bit`` asked spike ``sure am what can i do for you two`` cheerily replied the tall dark coated pony ``we would like to look at some haybox 360 games and some hoof station 3 games please, could you tell us where they are`` asked spike ``down there at the end of the isle`` said 8-bit as he turned and pointed revealing his manetendo controller cutie mark.
Spike was looking at call of hoof 2, and scootaloo was looking for equestria scrolls 5 marerim. After half an hour of looking spike and scootaloo walked up to the counter and scootaloo handed spike her game and spike put it with his in front of 8-bit. ``that`l be 100 bits please`` said 8-bit ``okay here you go`` replied spike as he handed him the bits ``have a nice day you two`` 8-bit called out as the left ``you too 8-bit`` replied spike and scootaloo at the same time, the giggled and waked toward the library.
When they got back twilight said that in an hour she would need spikes help and untill then he could play his new game, he nodded and said ``cmon scoots lets go`` as he held her hoof and ran up the stairs Twilight laughed to herself and walked to the kitchen. ``okay so what should we play scoots`` asked a happy spike ``umm we could play call of hoof 3`` said scootaloo ``okay`` replied spike.
Twilight called up the stairs an hour later and said ``SPIKE TIME TO HELP WITH DINNER`` ``ok twi`` was the response upstairs ``be down in a minute`` ``okay``replied twilight.
Spike rushed down the stairs almost tripping on the last few steps, he ran into the kitchen and said ``okay twi what are we making today`` ``well i was thinking maybe haygetti and daffodil balls with some RUBYS on the side`` happily replied twilight as she pulled 3 large rubys from her pack ``wow just for me twi`` exclaimed spike ``mmhmm`` ``wow thanks so much twi, i love you`` ``i love you to spike``.
When dinner was made spike called down scootaloo and they all sat down for dinner. ``so how was your day spike`` inquired twilight ``it was soo much fun`` said spike ``ya, spike bought me a new video game and we got some muffins and a slice of cake from pinkie`` chimed in scootaloo ``sounds like you had lots of fun`` replied twilight as she thought how good cake sounded right now.
After scootaloo and spike helped clean the dishes they ran upstairs to got to sleep ``night twi`` called spike ``goodnight twilight`` said scootaloo ``goodnight you two`` twilight replied as she giggled to herself and though how funny kids are.
hope you like the chap, i havent been writing because ive been working so sorry and hopefully if im not to busy the next chap will be 3X as big.