Torn Asunder

by Quilled Hoof

First published

Cadence and Shining Armor's honeymoon takes them to an island paradise which holds an ancient secret

Picking up where A Canterlot Wedding ends, this story follows Cadence and Shining Armor on their honeymoon to the Gallop'agos Islands. When Shining Armor goes out into the jungle to rescue a filly, Cadence must enlist the help of Twilight and her friends to save her husband and protect Equestria from a forgotten evil.

Introduction: Love is in Bloom

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Introduction: Love is in Bloom

“It’s MINE”, Rarity bellowed as she made a fevered grab at the bouquet which had left Cadence’s hooves a moment before. She smiled sheepishly as other ponies looked on disapprovingly, her magic holding the bouquet slightly farther from her greedy hooves, though not too far.

The clittler-clatter of the horseshoes played a merry tune as dozens of ponies watched the departing carriage make its way through the cobbled Canterlot streets. As explosions of color rocked the night sky over the city, Twilight and her friends giggled at Spike’s naivete regarding the now-failed bachelor party.

“Oh Spike, you know the bachelor party comes...” Twilight began.

“WASN’T THAT THE GREATEST!” Pinkie Pie interjected, leaving Twilight to trail off with a smile. “I mean I’ve seen some parties before but WOW there was that HUGE cake and dancing and such fun music and... and... oh did I mention cake?” Her breathless smile was so quintessentially Pinkie that everyone had to smile

“Calm down sugarcube, I think we ALL saw how much you enjoyed that cake” Applejack said with a chuckle.

“The cake was rather delectable,” Rarity added, “but the real star was Twilight and her wonderful singing- I didn’t know you had such a talent for songwriting, darling.”

“You’re too kind. Fluttershy deserves credit as well for coming up with the theme” Twilight said, her cheeks turning a slight shade of pink.

“Well love certainly IS in bloom, I ain’t never seen two ponies care more about each other than your brother and that Cadence. She sure is a gem” Applejack said as the six ponies and baby dragon turned to watch the carriage approach the gates of canterlot. “Where are they off to now, do ya’ reckon?”

Rainbow Dash’s face lit up, “OOO I know! I was talking to Soarin’ and he said he had heard that they were honeymooning in the Gallop’agos Islands to the south. Soarin’ said he was planning a trip there himself to train using the ocean thermals - isn’t that so awesome.” She squealed and began discussing the finer points of air currents to Fluttershy, who seemed a bit overwhelmed at such a technical discussion of flying but smiled at Dash all the same.

“Funny, that name sounds so familiar. ‘Ga-llop-agos’....” pondered Twilight as they all made their way out of the garden towards the castle. “Spike, remind me to look it up when we get back to Ponyville, won’t you?”

Spike answered with a snore from behind her, and she turned to see Rarity hold a hoof to her lips and then look back at the dragon sleeping gently on her back. A soft smile came across Rarity’s face that made Twilight’s heart beam. She looked up into the night sky and gave a whispered thank you to the stars for the gift of friendship that had changed her life. The six ponies made their way quietly into the castle and up to their rooms for some much deserved rest.

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“They are safely on their way your highness, they will reach Ferrier Port by morning with good weather”.

“Thank you for the report, and please pass on my most heartfelt thanks to the guard for their bravery and fortitude in dealing with the changelings. All of Equestria is in their debt.”

As the door to her chambers closed, Celestia let out a long sigh. She removed her crown and laid down on her bed, falling almost instantly asleep. Her dreams were mercifully free of invading armies and evil brides, instead she flew blissfully through sunny skies.

1: Cerulean Spectacle

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Chapter 1: Cerulean Spectacle

Sunny skies reigned throughout Equestria the next day, and after a brief stop in Ferrier Port and a very sincere thanks to their pony guard, Cadence and Shining Armor stood before a small ship. Inhaling a breath of salty ocean air, Cadene relaxed against Shining Armor’s shoulder and felt him nuzzle her mane softly.

“Isn’t it wonderful to be away from the madness of Canterlot, even if for a little while?” She said, turning her head to look into Shining Armor’s light blue eyes.

“Who says we’re going back?” Shining Armor smiled roguishly. “I think I could get used to the island life - sun, sand and you - what more could a pony ask for?”

“I think Celestia might have something to say about the captain of her guard never returning to Canterlot” Cadence chuckled as she imagined the look on Celestia’s face; it might be worth it just to see that, she thought. “Shine, I still can’t believe it - we’re really married”. Even though it was not the storybook wedding she had imagined as a filly, she had never been happier.

“Twilight really did get it right, ‘I can understand why Chrysalis would want to marry me, but what could i have done to deserve your love’?” Shining Armor immediately regretted what he said, and he he saw a shadow pass over Cadence’s face. “I’m sorry Cadence, I didn’t mean...I know it is still fresh in our minds, but she was defeated through our love. What I meant to say is, I’m the luckiest colt in the world to have you as my partner.” He saw her face soften as she gave him a quick peck and gazed out at the blue-green waters.

“I’m sorry Shine, you were only being kind. I just can’t forget how close I came to losing you. Down in those mines, I promised myself a thousand times over that if I made it back to you, I would never let you out of my sight again, and I don’t plan to. If Twilight hadn’t....” Cadence’s voice dropped as her eyes began to moisten. “No. There’s no point in thinking about what-ifs. We are together, and no force in equestria could pull us apart”.

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The small ship had boarded its small contingent of passengers, including the much stared-at royal couple and had cast off lines. The large mainsail unfurled, instantly buffeted by the strong breeze and the ship slowly accelerated to a fair clip, soon leaving the port town behind. The unicorn masthead cut a furrow in the tropical waters and threw a spray onto anypony curious enough to lean over the side of the bow. The sailors were in a jubilant mood; a stiff wind, fair weather, and the honor of transporting honored guests was more than enough to set them to singing as they worked:

The soil they work, with plow and seed

Strong backs, the sun and rain they need

Earth ponies feed us big and small

But us seaponies have it all!

Soaring high, with wings aloft

Bringing wind and clouds so soft

May good weather Pegasi always call

But us seaponies have it all!

Feats of strength, and untold power

With just the mind, they’ll build a tower

A Unicorn can tame a squall

But us seaponies have it all!

The Sun and Moon they raise for us

Without a toll and ne’er a fuss

Celestia and Luna our hearts enthrall

But us seaponies have it all!

The sailors finished the shanty with a cheer, ending on four or five different notes. Cadence and Shining Armor clapped along with the several other passengers on deck, and begged another song - which they were given without delay.

Despite being a motley mix of pegasus ponies, earth ponies, and unicorns the sailors love of the sea brought them together under their seapony moniker. Their cutie marks reflected their nautical bent: anchors, starfish, waves and even a spyglass adorned the flanks of the different ponies aboard.

Over the course of their voyage the royal couple laughed, sang, and told tales with the crew - eventually having to quell the myriad rumors that had made their way across equestria regarding the wedding. Shining Armor told most of the story, with Cadence filling in the parts that Shining Armor did not remember. Cadence gave the facts of the story but kept the memory of her heartbreak and much of her time spent underground with Twilight to herself. The couple was well-liked by all, and were never seen apart, day or night. When they reached the Gallop’agos islands on the evening of the third day, it was with high spirits and light hearts that Cadence and Shining Armor bid farewell to the crew of the Hippocampus and set foot on the sandy shores of paradise.

2: Trouble in Paradise

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Chapter 2: Trouble in Paradise

Cadence had never seen a more peaceful town than that of Maneoa. Situated in a natural harbor, and facing due east, it was the largest island in the Gallop’agos Archipelago. Surrounding the island were several smaller land masses, though the sailors had claimed they were surrounded by reefs too perilous to sail through. The main island of Maenoa - after which the town was named - was dominated by a volcano which sat dormant many miles inland. It cast an imposing shadow, but did not seem to trouble the people of the village.

The Maneoans greeted the royal couple without fanfare, parade, or celebration - a simple “welcome” and a warm smile gave the couple their first taste of island life. Cadence and Shining Armor both breathed a sigh of relief; after the wedding and triumphant departure from Canterlot, the last thing thing they wanted was any special treatment.

The pony who would be their host - Coral was her name - showed the couple to their lodgings. As Coral led the way to through town to their private bungalow, she explained a bit about the history of Maneoa and its inhabitants.

“Most ponies have never heard of Maneoa, or the Gallop’agos, though they have been populated by ponies of all kinds for over a thousand years” she said, glancing back to make sure her guests were still close behind. “They say when Celestia first raised the sun, the people of Maneoa were the first to see its golden rays”. The pride in her voice was clear as a bell and Shining Armor thought briefly of how much Twilight would love to see this place and learn its history. He chuckled as he thought of Twilight surrounded by books and scrolls back in ponyville, no doubt making up for study time lost by her wedding duties.

Cadence, while appreciative of the history lesson, was more interested in the current residents of Maneoa, and was eagerly drinking in all the sights and sounds as they wound their way through the village. The buildings closer to the bay were built on stilts, in case of a particularly bad storm, but farther inland two beautiful old stone towers were outlined by the starlight.

“What are those structures up there?” Cadence queried, raising a hoof and pointing to the ancient outlines of the structures.

“That is the Temple of the Four, said to have been built by the first inhabitants of the islands - what ‘four’ they refer to has been lost time the winds of time, but you are welcome to explore the architecture - we don’t get many visitors here, so you would have the place all to yourselves. That reminds me, how did you two decide upon Maneoa for your honeymoon? We are grateful to have you, but it has been some time seen we have seen ponies all the way from Canterlot.”

“After the wedding...we needed to get away, far away.” Cadence said with a bit of a shiver “Princess Celestia told us of this place and its tranquil beauty, and we decided it was just what we needed.” Cadence smiled at Shining Armor at “we” and he smiled back reassuringly.

“So far everything has been just perfect, and again, thank you so much for your hospitality and kindness” Shining Armor said, turning back to Coral. Coral was not paying attention however, and had suddenly grown stiff and looked as if she might let out a sob.

“I’m s-s-sorry” Coral said with a whimper, and turned up the road “Please f-f-follow me, we are almost there.”

“Wait...” Shining Armor said, touching Coral gently on the shoulder, “please, what’s wrong? Is there anything we can do to help?”

“No, no, there is not much anyone can do” Coral trailed off, and the sob that was fighting to escape succeeded.

Cadence placed her hoof around Coral’s neck and slowly walked her into a nearby cafe. Seated around a small table, with a warm cup of tea in her hooves, Coral began the tale. “Maneoa is a small town, and as such every pony knows and cares for each other deeply. Young colts and fillies may live with their families, but spend just as much time playing and learning from rest of the ponies in town. This has made our town strong, and fiercely defensive of our own - but it only makes tragedy that much more devastating to bear.” At this Coral finally let a tear slide down her cheek. Wiping it away with a hoof, she continued, “One of our young fillies went missing a few days ago while out on a hike with her classmates. We had search parties scouring the jungle and coastline east of the wall, but she was nowhere to be found. Captain, when you spoke Princess Celestia’s words ‘tranquil beauty’, I couldn’t help but think of our little lost filly - our Tranquility.” Further speech was lost to silent weeping for the lost filly. Cadence and Shining Armor exchanged pained looks, and both gave their utmost sympathies to Coral.

As heartbreaking as Coral’s tale was, something about it bothered Shining Armor. He did not doubt the truth of the story, but one detail had piqued his interest, and after consoling Coral for a few minutes he felt it was acceptable to sate his curiosity.

“Coral, you mentioned the search parties looked all over, but only east of the...wall? Why is that?” He hoped he had not offended Coral, and was relieved to see her face did not harden to the question.

“The Wall is as old as the Temple, some think even older, and it divides the island of Maneoa from Whale Bay in the North, to Turtleback Reef in the south. All ponies raised in Maneoa know not to venture beyond the Wall - it is the first thing we teach our foals when they are old enough to understand.”

Cadence had picked up on Shining Armor’s thoughts: “But what is beyond the Wall? Is it possible Tranquility could have crossed it?”

“Nopony knows exactly what resides there, but several generations ago, an adventurer pony sailed in looking to discover the secrets of Maneoa and our mountain, Kalohe Kapu. Against the wishes of every pony in Maneoa, the adventurer crossed the wall, never to be seen or heard from again.”

Shining Armor sat back in his chair, realizing he had been leaning forward in earnest while listening to Coral’s tale. A guilty look came over his face, but was quickly replaced with one of resolve. “Coral, is there a pony here that can take me to the Wall?”

Coral’s eyes grew wide, “Wh-why would you want to do such a thing? It is an arduous journey, and treacherous even for experienced Maneoans.”

Cadence was staring at Shining Armor in a similar manner to Coral, though her tone was much firmer when she spoke, “Shine, I know what you are thinking and no, you may not. If you think for a second that I am going to let you risk yourself to try and find that lost filly beyond that wall you must be crazy.”

Shining Armor turned to Cadence with a hurt expression, “Honey I know we came here to get away from our worries, but just because I leave Canterlot, I am not any less of a guardian of its people. If there is any chance that filly is out there, by the oath I swore I have to try and find her.”

Cadence was unphased: “Have you forgotten the oath you swore to ME upon that altar? I promised to never let you go and I won’t, even if it means I have to bind you myself!”

At that Shining Armor smiled, and gave Cadence and acquiescing look. “You’re right, as always. As terrible as it may be to stand by and do nothing....” here he paused and looked at Coral, who had returned to staring into her tea, “...I can not solve the problems of all Equestria, much less when we should be enjoying our time together.”

Cadence’s face softened and she nodded approvingly, though Shining Armor would not meet her eye. She chalked it up to concern for Coral, to whom she turned back and began the process of lifting the pony’s spirits.

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As the melodic tumble of the surf lulled Cadence to sleep, Shining Armor lay staring at the ceiling of the bungalow. His thoughts were a cacophony of contradictions, fighting for the metaphorical mountain top of a decision. As the stars wheeled through the sky out the window, Shining Armor breathed out a whisper: “Cadence, I’m sorry.”

3: Broken Promises

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Chapter 3: Broken Promises

Cadence awoke to tropical birds hailing the morning sun, yawned, stretched and rolled over to bid good morning to Shining Armor. She was met by an empty bed and a note. A chill ran through her body, and she fought down feelings of fear, confusion and anger - all of which struggled to win out and release themselves against whatever or whomever was in range. Cadence grabbed the note, barely glanced at her name written carefully on the front and read:

My Cadence,
I know you will not be pleased with this note, or its message. I am not trying to justify my decision - just give me a chance to explain what has driven me to find Tranquility; against your will and my own best judgement. I told you when we were first dating that I got my cutie mark because I always wanted to be in the royal guard, even as a little foal. That was always my dream, but that is not the full truth of how I got my cutie mark. When I was a little colt at school in Canterlot I had a classmate named Pip. He was the smallest colt in the class, and as such was made fun of by the bigger colts. He was also very late in getting his cutie mark, which only added to his humiliation. One day at recess we were all out on the playground and I saw Pip being bullied behind the schoolhouse. Usually the larger ponies would steal his food or call him names, but this time was different. The colts were holding him down while their leader, Jet, kicked Pip again and again. Something inside me roared and before I knew what was happening I had threw off the bullies and was standing over Pip, glaring at Jet and his cronies. “What’s the matter? Don’t like a fair fight?” I said, and then proceeded to have the hay kicked out of me by the three bullies. Eventually they got bored and walked off laughing. As I lay on the ground panting, I saw Pip staring at me with a look of awe on his face. I smiled back and winced at the effort, but as I got to my feet I felt the world had changed. I felt...full. Pip’s look of awe was not directed at my face, but at my flank which now bore a cutie mark. That day I found out my talent is for more than just guarding the princesses - protecting the helpless is what makes me whole. That day it was Pip, today it is Tranquility.

I love you with all my heart, and will return to you safe and sound, with the little filly in tow. Just know that I do this because I must - I could not live knowing there is more I could have done.

Yours now and forever,
Shining Armor

By the time Cadence had finished the note, her anger had subsided and all that remained was worry and guilt. She had spoken from the heart when she reminded Shining Armor of his vows to her, but she knew how terrible it was to have your true purpose thwarted as she had with Chrysalis. Being trapped in those caves, about to lose her love to an imposter had felt like having her soul removed. Shining Armor may be foolish to go in search of Tranquility, but he was an honest fool.Cadence folded the note carefully and put it on the table beside the bed.

There was never a doubt in her mind that she would be going after him, but being the more pragmatic of the pair, she knew her limitations. She was no hero, nor did she know the first thing about the island, Tranquility, or dealing with the dangers of the jungle. She would need help getting Shining Armor - and hopefully Tranquility - back safely. She galloped out of the bungalow and into town, headed for the post office.

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The pegasus mailpony looked up from the desk to see a somewhat winded but very elegant alicorn standing in the doorway. He had heard there were guests on the island but did not expect to see them so soon and in such a fashion. This pony did not look interested in small talk, so he went straight to the heart of the matter: “What can I do for you miss?”

Cadence had already thought out her letter on the way to the post office and wasted no time: “I have a letter to send to Ponyville on business of Celestia, highest priority”. She put as much of her royal title into her voice as possible, and figured Celestia would understand if she ever found out about this use of royal power - Shining Armor WAS captain of the guard after all.

Several minutes later the mailpony closed the office and took off into the air like a shot. He had never carried mail for royalty before, nor had he been to Ponyville. It would be an arduous flight, but the urgency in the young princess’ voice, matched with the letter’s contents gave a fleetness to his wings he had never felt before.

As he disappeared into the horizon, Cadence took a deep breath and set off for Coral’s house; she had much to do before Twilight and her friends arrived.

4: Preparations

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Chapter 4: Preparations

Kissing Cadence lightly on the forehead and making sure his note was visible on the pillow, Shining Armor set off just past midnight into town. He knew he would not find anypony awake to aid his mission, but walking through town that evening he had noticed a few missing pony fliers showing Tranquility’s picture and, more importantly to him, the address of her parents.

Flier in hand, Shining Armor knocked strongly on the door to the squat one-level house. A red-eyed pony came to the door looking exhausted but not as if from sleeping. “Who are you? What do you want at this hour?” he said gruffly.

“My name is Shining Armor, and I am captain of the royal guard in Canterlot. I’m come to help find your daughter” Shining Armor said with as much confidence as he could muster.

At the mention of his daughter the pony went stiff and his eyes narrowed: “If this is some kind of sick joke I want no part of it, just leave my family in peace”. He started to shut the door.

“Wait, please!” Shining Armor begged, holding his hoof out. “I’m telling the truth. I heard about what happened to Tranquility and believe I might know where to find her - I just need to get over the Wall.”

Tranquility’s father looked hard at Shining Armor, taking in his stature and cutie mark. He seemed to accept Shining Armor’s credentials and invited him inside. “If you know what happened to Tranquility, you must have been told by now that no one crosses the wall. It is forbidden - Tranquility knows...knew that just as we all do.”

Shining Armor adopted his most earnest tone, “But no-pony knows why. If there is even the slimmest chance she is somewhere on this island, I must do what I can to find her. Even if it means finding out why crossing the wall is so forbidden.”

The pony, who went by the name of Zen, looked into Shining Armor’s eyes and saw that his words were true - he really would brave the Wall to find Tranquility. Hardening himself to his sadness, he gave Shining Armor a long look. “I thank you...from the bottom of my heart... for your help. In truth I had considered crossing by myself, but was so lost in grieving that I could barely get up in the morning. Well if we are going to do this, we will do it right! I’ll pack us some gear, a map, and provisions. We can set off as soon as you are ready. If we leave soon, we can make it to the wall by sunrise and try to find a way across in the light of day. Do you have anything to see to before we set out?”

Shining Armor swallowed hard and pictured Cadence’s sleeping form, a soft smile playing on her face as she dreamt away. “The sooner we leave, the better. I have a promise to keep.”

5: Fact and Fiction

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Chapter 5: Fact and Fiction

“Just a teensy weensy bit higher...perfect!” Pinkie Pie exclaimed, hopping in circles around the base of the ladder as Applejack made her way down carefully and stood back to examine her handiwork.

“Not bad for a morning’s work, I reckon.”

It was just before noon and the pegasus ponies of Cloudsdale had given Ponyville a forecast of blue skies all day - perfect for a party. The west grove of Sweet Apple Acres was hardly recognizable as an orchard after Pinkie Pie had worked her magic. The sunlight that penetrated the trees was stopped by brightly colored streamers and bunches of balloons straining to explore the skies. Hay bales ringed the grove to give seating and a natural boundary to the soon-to-be packed party. A table to one side held two punch bowls full to the brim and copious amounts of cakes and sweets. Strung between the two tallest trees in the grove was a beautifully hand painted sign, which Applejack had finished just 10 minutes previous. With the last piece of decorations in order, there was only one thing left to do - have a party!

An hour later, a blindfolded but grinning Big Macintosh was led up to the grove. As the blindfold was pulled from his eyes, a chorus of “HAPPY BIRTHDAY!” met his ears and he smiled even wider. The Apple family women mobbed Big Mac and showered him in hugs before releasing him to give his birthday speech:

“Thank you everypony, for doin’ this for me.”

A sheepish look came over Big Mac, and growing more and more uncomfortable with the dozens of pairs of eyes locked on him he gave a wave to Pinkie Pie who stood ready and willing at the record player. As music filled the grove,ponies began queuing to wish Big Mac their best personally and Pinkie enthusiastically led a Fluttershy to the dance floor telling her about an all new dance she picked up at the Wedding.

Twilight and Rarity sat off to the side, watching the festivities and commenting on the too-often glances Cheerilee sent at Big Mac as she pretended to listen to the what the mayor was trying to tell her about the upcoming midsummer celebration.

“Do you really think they would make a good couple? I mean Cheerilee is not much older than I am, and Big Mac is so...quiet” Rarity asked in a matter-of-fact tone as she sipped punch daintily from her cup.
“They are two of the kindest ponies I know and besides, I think we are getting rather good at this wedding thing” Twilight said with a laugh. Rarity joined in and as she was just about to start discussing Cheerilee’s imaginary wedding gown she noticed a commotion at the entrance of the party.
“What do you suppose that is all about?” Rarity asked, putting down her punch and straining her neck to see the newcomer who was causing such a ruckus. Her wish was granted as two ponies parted, both pointing their hooves at Twilight. Between them stood an exhausted but determined mailpony who, catching Twilight’s eye, started in a mad dash towards them.

“Miss Twilight Sparkle of Ponyville?” the mailpony said, catching his breath as he looked back and forth between Rarity and Twilight.

“That’s me!” Twilight said, “What is this about?”

“O Thank Celestia! Miss Sparkle, I have a letter for you which is of the utmost importance. A miss Cadence, its sender, said it was on the business of Princess Celestia and regards the captain of her Royal Guard?” he finished, thrusting a note into Twilight’s hooves.

“Shining Armor? Is he alright?!” She asked, tearing open the letter and reading as fast as she could. “Oh, oh no. He didn’t - he wouldn’t!”

“What is it dear?” Rarity asked, her confusion at the mailpony’s fervor replaced with concern.

Twilight finished her second read through of the letter and turned to Rarity, “Cadence needs our help - I’ll explain the rest on the way. Get the others, I’ll get us on the quickest train to Ferrier Port. Tell the others to pack for adventure.” With that, she thanked the mailpony again - who was being led over to the refreshments - and bolted for Ponyville junction.

Rarity sighed, “And just when I thought things were back to normal.” She saw Fluttershy standing quietly off to one side and started towards her, trying to think of a way to describe what just happened.

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The six ponies were plastered the the windows of the train as Port Ferrier came into view. Twilight’s eyes did not settle on the bustling town, instead drifting to the farthest horizon of the sea, searching. While Twilight was lost in thought, the other ponies could barely contain their excitement.

“Isn’t the sea just absolutely stunning? I’ve never seen such a beautiful shade of blue in my whole life. I must remember to work it into one of my designs.” Rarity said, though to whom exactly it wasn’t clear.

“I wonder if we will see any whales or dolphins? I hope they are friendly. Oh what if they don’t like me?” Fluttershy fretted, though Applejack reassured her that if they were to meet any ocean creatures, she was sure they would love Fluttershy just as much as her woodland friends did.

Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie were arguing over wind currents and pointing excitedly back and forth between a map set between them and the vista out the window.

“No Dashie, we want to head WEST first, THEN turn south. Otherwise we will be blown way off course!”

“But that will take FOREVER! I can pull us if the wind doesn’t go our way - I am the best young flier in Equestria after all!” Rainbow Dash said, flexing her wings.

“Fine we’ll try it your way, but don’t look at me if we end up in Saddle Arabia - actually that would be great! I’ve heard they have the best parades, and -’

“SHE WAS REAL!”

All the ponies turned to look at Twilight who, though slightly embarrassed from shouting, was clearly itching to explain.

“Sorry girls, but I finally think I figured why Cadence’s letter got me so worried and where I’ve heard of Maneoa before!”

Applejack voiced what they were all thinking, “I was kind of wondering why you seemed so worried about your brother. I mean I understand why Cadence would be all in a tizzy, but this seems like an awful long trip just to calm her down. We are happy to come with and help in any way we can but don’t you think Shining Armor can take care of himself?” The other ponies nodded, though of course only Applejack’s honesty had allowed her to question Twilight’s strong reaction.

“I think my brother is very capable, but when I read that letter, something inside me seized up. I couldn’t put my hoof on where this feeling of dread came from, but I trust Cadence, and know she wouldn’t ask for our help unless she really needed it.” Here she took a large breath, “I’m so grateful for you all coming, because now that I’ve remembered why the Gallop’agos islands are so familiar, my brother may be in greater danger than Cadence knows.”

Rainbow Dash perked up, “Maneoa, wasn’t that from...”.

Twilight nodded, “All fiction holds some element of truth - even if the fiction is as outlandish as Daring Do.”

Applejack spoke up: “Is anypony as confused as I am? What do a bunch of made up stories have to do with your brother?”

Clearly in her element, Twilight began, as if standing at the head of a class: “The Adventures of Daring Do the books are works of fiction, but they are not all made-up. When I was in Canterlot, I got really into the Daring Do books. After I devoured them all I needed more, so I scoured the Canterlot library for anything I could find about Daring Do or the author, Compass Rose. Buried in a stack of old biographies I found one of Compass Rose, in which she stated where she got the inspiration for Daring Do. She said “Daring Do is not so much a character as she is a part of me - so writing for her came naturally”. I remembered this because it seemed very strange given how secretive and reclusive Compass Rose was known to be. She may have been a great writer but adventuring did not seem her style. When she died, her estate passed to her nephew, who sold it to Princess Celestia - an avid admirer of Rose’s works. When I asked Celestia if she had known Rose, she smiled and said, ‘Oh Compass and I were very close. She was one of the bravest ponies I ever knew, and knew equestria better than almost anypony. She had that confidence, that daring attitude, as if she could do anything.’ I didn’t think much of it at the time but it all makes sense now. Compass Rose WAS Daring Do. That’s how she knew so much about Equestria, that’s why nopony ever saw her, and that’s why I’m so worried about Shining Armor. If Daring Do was real, then who says her stories weren’t real too? And that leads us to the Gallop’agos and Maneoa and...”

Beyond the Wall of the Four” Rainbow Dash finished. “Twilight if you’re right, and the story in that book is real, then your brother’s life could be in danger.”

“I know, which is all the more reason to hurry and stop him before he finds out how real that story is.”

6: The Wall of the Four

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Chapter 6: The Wall of the Four

Shining Armor leaned against a tree, panting, as he watched his guide nimbly jump over a fallen tree ahead of him. For the umpteenth time that day he marvelled at the agility and tirelessness of Zen and cursed his own relatively comfortable lifestyle in Canterlot. Captain of the Royal Guard was no easy post, but with the preparations for the wedding and maintaining the force field, he had let his exercise regimen fall by the wayside of late. It had started with skimping on marching and combat drills with his guards, then even his morning run had been slowly eaten away until he was lucky to have time for some stretching in the morning before running off to some task. He had promised himself that he would start running again on the honeymoon - Cadence liked to sleep in anyway - but a 7-hour hike through the jungle was not what he had had in mind. He had kept pace with Zen thus far, but only just. He had hidden his exhaustion by asking to examine Zen’s map to make sure they were still on course.

Zen on the other hand, seemed to relish to exhaustive effort. He was sweating as much as Shining Armor, but never stumbled or tore his eyes off the next rise or obstacle. All the energy he had bottled up in grief had finally found an outlet in their adventure, and he was hellbent on walking until his legs collapsed or they hit the wall. Shining Armor would have to remind the pony to keep drinking water, as even Zen’s basest needs were subsumed by the fire inside.

The sun had been up for several hours, but there was no chance of being stumbled upon by Maneoans. The town sat on the southern end of the island, and by now Zen and Shining Armor had run a northwesterly trail and were now approaching the wall just south of Whale Bay.

Zen turned and saw that Shining Armor had stopped: “Come on Captain, not far now. Soon we’ll be at the place where it is said the great adventurer crossed the Wall.”

Shining Armor shook out the cramps in his legs and trotted to catch up to Zen, who upon finishing his sentence, had immediately turned and continued through the forest. He was just about to ask Zen who this great adventurer was when he heard a twig snap behind him. Now the jungle was filled with ambient sounds - birds squawking, frogs croaking, wind rustling in the trees - but something in a pony’s mind can tell when a simple sound like a breaking branch means danger.

Shining Armor tensed and hissed at Zen, “ZEN! DON’T MOVE”.

Zen stopped midstep and swivelled his eyes around to look at Shining Armor. Shining Armor flicked his eyes over his left shoulder and his horn started to glow a deep purple. Before Shining Armor could even begin to form a spell in his mind the attack came. Shining Armor grunted as a heavy object roughly his size slammed into his side. He felt claws sink into his saddle bags and shrugged them off while bucking with all his might. In one motion he dislodged the predator and turned, throwing up a protective shield like the one that had protected Canterlot around himself and Zen. Zen was frozen in place, still barely processing the initial attack.

Shining Armor was panting with the effort of the shield and trying to calm himself as he watched a lithe jaguar tear into his saddlebags and turn its nose up at the meager rations he had packed. Upon finding nothing of interest in the pack, the jaguar turned to the two ponies standing wide-eyed, surrounded by a strange purple sphere. Hesitant to attack this new and strange apparition, the jaguar paced back and forth before the shield. Deciding such a fantastic meal was worth a bit of risk, the jaguar moved up and swiped at the shield. His paw bounced harmlessly off the shield and the jaguar took a step back, confused but unhurt.

Shining Armor on the other hand winced at the effort of deflecting the jaguar’s blow. Between gritted teeth he said to Zen, “We need to find a way to escape. I can hold the shield for now, but it he launches a full attack at it, I might not have the energy left to protect us.”

Shining Armor cursed his exhaustion again - had they faced this threat at the beginning of their trek it would have been a small feat to hold this size shield for at least a few hours while the jaguar moved on to less well-guarded prey. Now, he only prayed that Zen had something up his sleeve.

“Hold it as long as you can. We are only a few hundred yards from the Wall I believe. Follow me as best you can” Zen pronounced, and began slowing making his way away from the jaguar with Shining Armor following him backward having to stare into the golden eyes of the hungry jaguar.

Just as Shining Armor was about to tell Zen to stop and prepare to fight hoof to claw, he heard a whisper in his ear, “Give it all you’ve got Shining, I’ve found the place I was searching for. All we need is a distraction to confuse the jaguar and hide our escape”.

Shining Armor took his eyes briefly off the jaguar to glance to his right. The large green barrier to his right - which he had only seen out of the corner of his eye and had assumed was just dense foliage was in fact a towering 40 foot wall of stone, covered almost completely in creeping vines. Shining Armor turned to the jaguar and - with Cadence’s sleeping visage swimming before his eyes, he let out a mighty shout and yelled “SHUT YOUR EYES” before releasing a blinding flash across the jungle.

As Shining Armor opened his eyes to their now shieldless state, he felt his hoof pulled into a small hole in the vines which had been invisible a second earlier. A musty and dark few seconds let to a similar green curtain being pulled apart and a view of Zen emerging into the jungle. Respite was not theirs yet, and they both spend several minutes pushing large broken pieces of the wall into place over the tunnel to stop any pursuit.

Falling down on the pile of rubble they both panted and laughed off all the stress and fear that had accumulated since the initial attack. After a good long rest, Shining Armor was the first to stand and offer his hood to Zen. Pulling up the older pony, his eyes travelled up the wall and grew wide. Seeing his shock, Zen turned to look at the wall and adopted a similar look of disbelief.

“Shining Armor, what are those?” Zen asked shakily.

“I haven’t the faintest idea, but I’m starting to think you were right about the Wall. Some things are better left unknown.”

The two ponies were speechless as four pairs of stony eyes looked down upon them with unblinking malice.

7: Arrival from Above

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Chapter 7: Arrival from Above

A warm breeze ruffled Cadence's mane as she pored over the map of Maneoa provided to her by Coral. She must have looked at the map a thousand times, and had committed as much as she could to memory.

It had been four days since she had sent her letter and she was just now starting to be able to focus for a few minutes before glancing to the sea - hoping to see the prow of a ship that would carry Twilight and the rest; she had no doubt they would answer her call. She was even able to tune out the commotion that seemed to have some of the ponies in Maneoa chattering excitedly around her.

The breeze came again, and this time it carried more than just warm sea air. A faint voice came on the wind and thought it was faint, it had a very distinct note of excitement to it.

“WE’RE HERE! CADENCE! HIYA!”

It took Cadence a second to place the sound, though she had already recognized the voice as Pinkie’s. Her eyes had immediately gone to the waves but when they met nothing but ocean, she realized that the voice was coming from above her. As she craned her neck skyward she couldn’t help but smile; Pinkie Pie’s joyful face was sticking dangerously far out of the basket of an enormous balloon as it descended into the town square. All the other ponies in the square were waving and getting ready to receive the balloon and must have seen the balloon from some distance away.

Along with the balloon she saw two pegasus ponies holding guideropes and making small adjustments to assure a safe and controlled landing. She recognized them as friends of Twilight’s from the wedding, and in a moment she called out to them: “Rainbow Dash! Fluttershy! I can’t tell you how happy I am to see you!”. She set off towards the balloon and met the basket just as it thumped on the ground.

Twilight hopped lightly out of the balloon, happy to have solid ground beneath her hooves again before being tackled to the ground by a pink blur.

“TWILIGHT! Thank you thank you thank you” Cadence couldn’t help herself - she had never been so happy to see her old friend.

Twilight returned Cadence’s enormous hug before brushing herself off and speaking, “Cadence, we came as fast as we could. We would have been here sooner but we got blown a bit off course.”

At this Rainbow Dash reddened slightly but finished securing the ropes to nearby trees before joining Twilight and Cadence. The rest of the Ponyville contingent had already exchanged greetings with Cadence.

Cadence waited until Rainbow had joined them before speaking to them all, “I can’t express what it means to see you all here”. Here she brushed a tear away before going on: “I know you are all very busy ponies and from the bottom of my heart - thank you for putting your lives on hold to help Twilight and me. I don’t know how much Twilight as told you of my letter, but since then I have a bit more information that will help narrow our search for Shining Armor and Zen.”

Twilight looked puzzled, “Zen? I thought Shining Armor went off alone?”

A timid looking, light green pony approached the group - clearly waiting to be introduced but forgotten in Cadence’s jubilation. “Zen is my husband - and Tranquility is our daughter”.

Cadence looked to the green pony and smiled sheepishly, “I’m so sorry Serenity, I completely forgot to introduce you to my friends. Serenity these are my friends from Ponyville - Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Rainbow Dash. Everypony, this is Serenity; she is the key to finding Shining armor and her husband, Zen.”

Applejack tipper her hat to Serenity before speaking to Cadence, “I think you’d better start at the beginning sugarcube.”

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The six Ponyville ponies and Serenity sat around a large table finishing tea and biscuits as Cadence explained about Coral’s tale (with quiet additions by Serenity), Shining Armor’s note, and the little she knew about the Wall. All the Ponyvillians listened attentively, especially when it came time for Serenity to add her part to the tale

She began in a timid whisper, “Several nights ago, I was awoken by a knock on the door. Zen went to see who could be calling a this hour and I laid in bed and listened. I couldn’t catch everything that was said, but I could tell it was serious - I heard the Wall mentioned several times. Much to my shame I could not stay awake for the entire conversation - I was just so tired from days of crying and searching. A while later I felt a kiss on my cheek, thinking Zen had come back to bed I sighed and rolled over on my pillow. When I woke in the morning Zen was gone, as was the pony that come had come to call. Two pairs of saddlebags were missing as well as a good amount of food from the larder. There were several books out on the table - all having to do with Maneoan history. At first I thought Zen had gone out to study the Temple ( he was somewhat of a history buff) but when he didn’t come back that night I began to get worried. I was in town the next day when I ran into Cadence, who was asking anypony she could find if they had seen Shining Armor. I thought it strange that this newcomer had lost her husband as well. When she mentioned Tranquility my throat seized up and I knew exactly where Zen was - and knew who the mysterious visitor must be. Since then Cadence and I have been trying to learn everything we can about the wall and where Zen might have led them. I have no doubt, and Cadence agrees, that if it is possible they have crossed the wall by now.” Thought the ponies had leaned in to hear the beginning of her tale, by the end there was steel in her voice and a look of fearlessness in her eyes that reminded those who knew of Fluttershy when she had confronted the dragon.

Twilight was the first to speak, “Thank you for telling us this Serenity, and again, I’m so sorry for what happened to Tranquility. We will do everything we can to find out what has happened to her during our search.” She then set to talking with Cadence and Serenity about the best course through the jungle, making liberal use of a map spread out on the table before them. Rainbow Dash and Applejack had already begun making a checklist of all they would need for their journey, and Pinkie and Fluttershy were discussing the host of tropical creatures they would (and hopefully would not) meet in the jungle. Rarity was sketching a very complex looking pair of saddlebags with pouches sewn all along the sides and hidden flaps that could be unfurled in case of rain.

After about an hour they split up to gather supplies and in Rarity’s case, do some quick modifications to the saddlebags the ponies had brought with them. By 3pm they stood at the center of town with saddlebags full of food, and water. Fluttershy had packed an emergency first-aid kit, as well as salves and balms for cuts, burns and stings. Rainbow Dash carried a parang on the side of her saddlebags, and around Applejack’s waist was wound a hundred feet of rope. Pinkie Pie was in charge of the cooking, and in true fashion was already hopping around, enjoying the jingle-jangle of the pots and pans strapped to her back. Having discovered that Serenity was an artist, Rarity was happily keeping Serenity’s mind off of the situation by discussing her favorite dyes and paints with the Maneoan and learning quite a bit about local dyes native only to Maneoa.

Cadence stood staring into the jungle as Twilight made one last run through of her checklist: “Ok and compass - check. I think that’s it Cadence, are you ready?”

Turning to face the party, she was met by smiles and looks of encouragement. She looked each pony in the eye before answering, “I’ve never felt more ready for anything.”

The group set a quick pace through the town, they had several hours of hiking if they were make it to Slipstone Grotto by nightfall. None of them looked back as they entered the verdure and were plunged into the eternal twilight that pervaded beneath the canopy.

8: Into the Unknown

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Chapter 8: Into the Unknown

They had been hiking for only a few hours and Rainbow was already getting antsy. The lushness below the canopy made it hard for her to fly without constantly dodging vines and tree-trunks all deadset, she imagined, against her progress through the jungle. After getting tangled for the second time, Twilight had suggested she walk with the rest of them and taking her advice, Rainbow now led the group, parang at the ready should any foliage get in her way. The pace she set was quick enough but being earthbound for that long never sat well with her and she began to yearn for open sky.

"Can't I just fly above all these trees?" Rainbow asked, craning her neck at the treetops 50 feet above the ponies.

Applejack brought Rainbow's hopes back down to earth: "We shouldn't split up - there are enough missing ponies as is. Besides we wouldn't be able to hear or see you up there, how would we know where ya are?"

"Fine, but next time we take a rest I'm going up to see if I can catch a glimpse of the wall." Spurned on by her self-set goal, Rainbow increased the pace to a trot.

"C'mon Fluttershy! You wouldn't want to be left behind!" Rarity called over her shoulder as she noticed Fluttershy had paused, again, to watch a pack of ants carrying pieces of leaf troop across a low branch.

"Oh isn't this just amazing Rarity? So many new creatures, and the COLORS!" Fluttershy said, galloping to catch up to the Rarity.

Rarity smiled at Fluttershy's rare expression of excitement and though she still walked with her eyes on her hooves to avoid tripping or stomping into any mud, she had to admit that the jungle was certainly a vibrant and lively place.

There were only two ponies who were not focused on their surroundings. Serenity had a far away look in her eyes, which always seem set on the next bend or rise in their path. Twilight spent most of her time poring over the map and compass held in front of her by her magic. Every so often she called to Rainbow to alter course slightly or keep on the lookout for a particular rise or rock formation that would allow her to keep track of their position. Twilight also kept her mind on her navigating in order to distract her from the leaden feeling in her lungs and her legs. Out of all the ponies, besides perhaps Serenity, she was the least fit for a long overland trip. Working at a bakery gave Pinkie ample opportunity for snacking, but her constant hopping and bouncy nature kept her in prime condition and her natural energy made this trek an adventure to her.

"Don't you all just LOVE it here? It's like a giant playground!" Pinkie exclaimed, hopping from root to root as the passed by an enormous banyan tree.

Before anypony could respond to Pinkie's overly optimistic expression, Rainbow went rigid as a board and in as loud as a whisper as she could muster exclaimed, "everypony group up, NOW!"

Too startled to argue or question, the ponies all formed a semicircle with Twilight's glowing horn at the front, a warding spell already forming in her mind. Rainbow landed and crept slowly back, her eyes never leaving a gap in the foliage several yards ahead. By the time she was even with twilight they had both spotted the eyes warily watching them from the undergrowth.

"Leopard I think, looks like a young male" Twilight recited with her usual professorial air tainted with a hint of fear. "What do we do?"

Fluttershy, though at the rear of the semicircle, had seen more in those eyes than hunger. "He's not waiting to pounce, he's...afraid. I can't imagine why though."

Everypony was a bit startled when Cadence spoke; she had been almost completely silent during their hike thus far. "I think this leopard has met with ponies before...and ended up worse for the wear. No pony could handle a leopard physically, so i had to be magic." She paused here, not wanting to sound foolish but unable to control her excitement, "I think he met up with Shining and Zen."

Twilight had been forming a similar thought already so quickly jumped onto the thread: "which might explain why he is glancing behind him - he thinks this may be a trap and Shining and Zen are waiting to spring on him if he shows himself. That means..." and for the first time since they arrived she felt some form of relief, "that means they must have been nearby, and escaped or continued on in that direction. C'mon everypony!"

Spurned on by Twilight's conclusions, and itching to make herself useful in what had so far been a cerebral affair, Applejack let out a wild "Yeehaw!" and took off at a breakneck pace towards the leopard. She was confident one good buck would send the leopard running, but she felt invincible with the sound of fourteen pairs of hooves behind her and a crackling energy that signaled the three unicorns were ready should Applejack's physicality prove insufficient. As the group barreled forward the leopard lost all fear of a trap - his new found fear of a pony stampede made his decision to bolt an easy one and before the ponies reached his hiding place he had melted into the forest as quickly and stealthily as he could. As he slunk across a tree branch several hundred yards away, he decided perhaps it was time to find a new territory - this one was becoming too crowded for his liking.

The pony stampede did not stop at the bush but continued for almost 100 yards, only ending when Applejack abruptly put on the breaks to avoid slamming into a tall stone structure. Fluttershy did not quite get the message though, having run most of the time with her eyes squeezed shut, and ended up in a pile with a breathless Rarity and a giggling Pinkie Pie.

"That was GREAT! Can we do that again sometime?" Pinkie Pie exclaimed between fits of giggles.

"Darling, we have very different ideas of fun. Although I must admit it did get the blood going" Rarity admitted, brushing herself off and helping a blushing Fluttershy to her feet.

Applejack was focused on what had halted her progress. "Well it looks like we found that wall you were talking about, but how in the hay are we going to get to the other side?"

The branches were too thick at the top of the wall to fly over - certainly while carrying the other ponies, and digging would be a laborious and lengthy process. Twilight had an idea, but it went against her powerful love of history. That love, however strong, paled in comparison to the love she felt for Shining Armor. She called all the ponies together and outlined her plan.

"We need to get through that wall and we don't have time to figure out where and how Shining and Zen did it. I need everyone but Rarity and Cadence to spread out along the wall and start looking for cracks - the bigger the better. Rarity and Cadence, the three of us should rest and have a snack while the others work. We'll all meet back here in 15 mintues."

Rainbow, hungry from her flying and the charge was indignant, "How come we have to pore over some wall while you guys get to rest?"

Twilight was only half listening as she pulled a book from her saddlebags but still turned back to answer Rainbow, "Us unicorns need a bit of rest and some energy...it is not easy to blow up a wall."

9: A Thing to Fear

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Chapter 9: A Thing to Fear

Tranquility's trail was not difficult for Zen and Shining to find. Everypony born on the island had a healthy respect for the jungle, and Zen had made sure that Tranquility learned her survival skills as well as the rest. Tranquility also had the advantage of being a unicorn - and a talented one at that. Within minutes of leaving the carving behind Zen let out a shout and hurried towards a small scoring in the wall.

"Here! This is her!"

Shining's heart was beating quickly with excitement, though his mind was puzzling over how a four wavy lines carved in an ancient wall could help them find the filly. Out of respect for Zen he didn't immediately ask the relevance of this oblique pictogram but Zen provided an explanation almost immediately.

"O my little Quil, you are such a smart, lovely child! Shining, we need to keep an eye out for this symbol - it is my daugther's cutie mark."

Having never seen a Zen garden before, Shining was still confused but being a soldier he had no problem setting aside his confusion in favor of a now-attainable goal: follow the trail.

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The pair stopped. The next cutie mark bread-crumb was visible ahead, but neither Shining nor Zen could move their hooves. Their eyes were similarly petrified, though there was not much choice as the vista that captured their attention was overpowering.

They had approached the jungle's hidden edge at a trot - spurned on by their success with the trail but becoming more and more confused as time went on.

"Why would she do this?" Shining wondered aloud for the fourth or fifth time since their journey began, "if she were hurt, how would she have the energy or focus to leave us this trail? More importantly, if she is not hurt, why did she cross the wall?"

"I don't know my friend, but when we find her, all our questions will be answered." Zen often spoke with this quiet eloquence, his nature matching his name perfectly. Although all his focus was on the next mark - the next clue - something deep in his psyche knew the truth and importance of Shining's questions - what had happened to his daughter? He knew he should feel hopeful. He didn't though, the power of knowledge opened up a world of more specific and nightmarish scenarios that tore him apart.

Shining was just about to ask about possible magical plants indigenous to the island when they broke free of the dimly-lit jungle and burst forth not into the bright sunlight of day but into the shadow only slightly lighter than the understory.

Kalohe Kapu stood before them.

The massive volcano, which had brought Maneoa from the depths in eons past was impossibly monstrous. Thousands of feed of jagged razors led their eyes to the smoldering crater, which ominously ejected a puff of smoke as if laughing at the minuscule creatures which now marvelled in it's shadow.

The sudden fear was overpowering and rooted Zen and Shining to the spot, their ears flattening and nostrils flaring instinctively. Shining was barely able to prevent himself from bolting in the direction they had come. As he tried to master himself, he drew a ragged breath and for the first time in his life, realized he was the one who needed protecting.


He needed Cadence.