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Quilled Hoof


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Picking up where A Canterlot Wedding ends, this story follows Cadence and Shining Armor on their honeymoon to the Gallop'agos Islands. When Shining Armor goes out into the jungle to rescue a filly, Cadence must enlist the help of Twilight and her friends to save her husband and protect Equestria from a forgotten evil.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 11 )

Next chapter (or two) should be coming tomorrow Scarlet. Glad you like it. :yay:

This couple just cannot seem to get a break. Their wedding is the pivotal moment of a plot to turn all of ponykind into little more than farm animals (the irony), and now their honeymoon is under attack? This one wonders what they did to piss off the universe so badly.

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An alicorn princess and the captain of the royal guard are a pretty powerful pair, so I think they can tackle their fair share of challenges. Equestria needs all the heroes it can get; there's a lot of evil around...

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They were obscure to the universe until just before the wedding, of course.:ajsmug:

love the chapter, and first post

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Thanks! Writing dialogue for the mane six is much harder than I thought, but also quite enjoyable. My respect level for the writers has skyrocketed since I started writing in-universe. Next chapter should be out in a few days. I want to try and keep with the longer updates (1,500+ words) so it doesn't feel too serialized. Any and all feedback is much appreciated, especially on the pacing. Having never written fiction of this (proposed) length, I don't really know how to balance fleshed out scenes with plot movement.

WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO PUT NEW CHAPTERS??:fluttercry::applecry::raritycry:
Would really appreciate it, this is a REALLY good story and I'm soooooooo curious to know what happens!!! :raritydespair: please put more:fluttershysad:

Sorry for the long delay - work really ramped up in June and July, but I should be able to finish the story with some regularity over the coming weeks. Thanks for reading!

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