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First of let me just say thank you so much for sticking around this fic for so long. Especially to those who are still around when I first posted the story.

But to the main topic.

Chapter 32 - Let's see how annoying I can get, was definitely not something I expected to write. The amount of action, emotion, detail, action (yes I know I said it before but it deserved to be mentioned again), and planning was beyond what originally wanted this fic to be. I wanted it to be lighthearted, lot's of simple jokes and humorous scenes and nothing to take seriously. Just senseless comedic humor.

But with the recent change to a main arc (The Daughter), I find myself writing more and more about plots (NO INNUENDO JOKES PLEASE!!!). It's certainly entertaining and fun, but it diverges away from the original idea of this fic. I know a lot of you enjoy the humor in the story (I hope) and I worry that this fic might become too serious for your preference.

Much as I enjoy writing these epic scenes, I wanted to go back to the simple roots again. Don't worry, I'm not abandoning the big plot (please resist the urge to make a joke out of that). There will be added bits to keep the main arc moving, however it will not be the focus.

I simply don't want to lose sight of what I enjoy most when writing a story; making people laugh.

So I apologize to those who desperately waits for that one epic scene where Rodney discovers the truth, but please be a bit more patient. I have started planning for that scene a LONG time ago, and it's still not really ready yet.

But don't despair, it's not like I plan on writing 10 chapters with little progress on the main arc. Maybe two, three at most.

I hope this doesn't discourage anyone from reading the next few chapters, I do make the effort to make them as high quality as possible. Plus as I mentioned before there will be little tidbits of the plot in them.

Again, thank you for sticking around and I hope you continue to enjoy the story wherever it may lead.

And whenever it may end.  

~ Zai

Zaibatsu · 88 views · Edited 1w, 1d ago

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#449310 · 3w, 4d ago · · ·
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Knock knock

#240389 · 21w, 5d ago · · ·
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>>240386

I'll let him know that. No promises that it will do anything to prevent future messages like this one.

#240386 · 21w, 5d ago · · ·
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>>240383

Tell him this.

"Sorry but I don't speak stroke."

#240383 · 21w, 5d ago · · ·
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RandomEncounter asked me to deliver a message. :moustache:

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#178532 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>176543 If you are it needs to have something more that ties into the story other than the name of the main character. Course that's my opinion, lord knows this fic needs a cover pic. So whatever you give will most likely end up there. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

#177946 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>176543 Are you making me a cover pic? :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

#176543 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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This is a work in progress, but I just wanted to know what you thought.

#125386 · 35w, 5d ago · · ·
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>>125381

Oh, don't feel too much pressure.  I'm just here to stalk you...

And remember... stalking is...

#125381 · 35w, 5d ago · · ·
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>>125345 First DustTraveler, now you. I don't need my fav authors reading my crap. Adds unnecessary pressure dammit!:fluttercry:

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